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Review #1, by Healer_25 Beginnings of a Life Forgotten

15th February 2005:
If you added a bit more of descriptive text it would make the story more interesting, show their inner feelings and frustrations, their hand gestures, the things they see, etc. Otherwise its coming along fine. As well you run the risk or making a Mary Sue, I like how your using the world but apparently not Harry and friends.

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