{reviewid: 2789948, reviewer: 'bananasareamazing'}
1st June 2013:
aw that's so sweet! I love this story and the pairing and the mention of the Mirror of Erised
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{reviewid: 2366627, reviewer: 'iForgot'}
23rd June 2010:
Two attractive male fifteen year olds were panting and out of breath, in a room neither one of them had seen before.
'That was a close one mate.' whispered a very handsome boy with long black hair and a gorgeous face.
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XD Okay, seriously. Who's writing this?! Did Sirius get an account here?!
Still, cute fic.
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{reviewid: 2344487, reviewer: 'xLauriePotter'}
8th May 2010:
this was just, beautiful ((:
♥
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{reviewid: 2295140, reviewer: 'mangoz2'}
6th February 2010:
aww that was so sweet! =D
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{reviewid: 2195133, reviewer: 'sreduaram'}
16th August 2009:
awww. completely adorable! its so sweet how they are holding hands for like half of it, and she doesnt even let go until he points is out. cuteness :D
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{reviewid: 2183566, reviewer: 'Camilla%20Monet'}
4th August 2009:
AW
SO VERY CUTE
E :')
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{reviewid: 2153685, reviewer: 'jman7693'}
2nd July 2009:
Haha this was cute! James has finally gotten Lily to kiss him! Hurray!! ;D This was a nice little read. I enjoyed it a lot.
9/10-;D
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{reviewid: 2051657, reviewer: 'Jameslovelily123'}
8th February 2009:
awww thats so sweet! loved it
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 2017316, reviewer: 'rosie13'}
26th December 2008:
omg that was so easily one of the best stories i read ever!!!
i just love it. it so beautiful and so cleaver and breath taking!
loved it, love it, love it! =] =] =] =]
Author's Response: Wow, that's such a great review! I'm glad you like this story so much! I really appreciate the read and review!
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{reviewid: 2006537, reviewer: 'HPlover101'}
10th December 2008:
Cute! I love fluffy stories!
Author's Response: Thanks! Me too, I love some good fluff every once and a while. Glad you liked my story!
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{reviewid: 1975467, reviewer: 'WeasleyWannbe'}
27th October 2008:
That was so cute!! I loved every word of it! I give this story a million ... plus three :D
Author's Response: That is so sweet of you, thank you so much for the read and review.
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{reviewid: 1943859, reviewer: 'Gutterflower'}
6th June 2008:
Ok, this fic is amazing.
Great idea! And I had never noticed this bit;
"erised stra ehru oyt ube cafru oyt on wohsi" in the book, but I've just checked and it totally does say that. How awesome.
=]
Author's Response: Oh why thank you very much! You just made my day all happy!
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{reviewid: 1914598, reviewer: 'Liz'}
4th May 2008:
Awww, that was sweet. I hadn't seen someone incorporate the mirror of erised into one of their stories yet. Well written.
Question for you, who is the guy in your banner? I have no idea who it is and I've seen him in all sorts of banners on the site and google has failed me. *tear*
Author's Response: Thanks, and I actually no idea who he is. I'm sorry! Crimsonemeralds made my banner (and did an amazing job). I'm sorry I can't be more helpful. :[ But thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1897477, reviewer: 'Alassie'}
16th April 2008:
I love this! AH! It's perfect. hahah good job. this one is definitely my fave so far.
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{reviewid: 1868291, reviewer: 'Padfoot36'}
18th March 2008:
What a cute love story!!! I like the unique way that James and Lily fell in love =D
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{reviewid: 1863126, reviewer: 'dramaqueen728'}
14th March 2008:
aw... that was adorable
nice choice w/ the mirror of erised
thats creative :]
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{reviewid: 1863042, reviewer: 'Weasley%20Twins_Lover'}
13th March 2008:
This story is pretty cool, I love it!
Oh...by the way this my first review ever!!!
Beautiful Story
Author's Response: First review ever?! I feel very special :D Thank you for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it. You might want to check out my author's page to check out some of my other James/Lily stuff :] Thanks again!
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{reviewid: 1862652, reviewer: 'amritab529'}
13th March 2008:
that was a really great one-shot.
really creative. i can imagine something like that happening.
great great job :) 10+more/10
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{reviewid: 1840675, reviewer: 'remustheromantic'}
| Review #19, by remustheromantic | Desire |
22nd February 2008:
Omg that is a wicked clever story. I thought it was great and nicely written. I loved how you figured out erised is desired backwards and I love the passionate kiss. Nicley done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Not to mention, you were my 50th reviewer! PARTY!
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{reviewid: 1823277, reviewer: 'Midnight%20Ink'}
8th February 2008:
Haha, I love the winking mirror James. This was a great one-shot, short and sweet, good work!
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{reviewid: 1820016, reviewer: 'James_Girl_Lily'}
5th February 2008:
That was so sweet! You did an amazing job! 10/10 =)
Author's Response: Okay, so after I saw on your review I clicked on your penname to see if I had read anything of yours, then I checked out your favorites, and we have like all the same ones! Sorry, just throwing that out there. Thanks for the awesome review, I appreciate it.
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{reviewid: 1818259, reviewer: 'Rose%20Wilts'}
4th February 2008:
Awww! That was gorgeous! I loved it. The characterization and imagery was all nice. But the plot was just so cute, I couldn't focus on that. Great job. Very sweet.
Rose
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thank you to all that reviewed also!
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{reviewid: 1817408, reviewer: 'please_dazzle_me'}
3rd February 2008:
wow! so cute i loved it! great job with their personalities. I really enjoyed it!
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{reviewid: 1812938, reviewer: 'anyavioletta'}
31st January 2008:
ah... that was really nice. And a very fresh, clever and original way of looking at how they got together.
I am very impressed.
Congrats on a great story :)
Love Anya
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{reviewid: 1758322, reviewer: 'ARoseNamedLily'}
18th December 2007:
Aw! that was really sweet!
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