So tragic really. 7/10

Author's Response: I hope you're talking about what happened in the story and not the actual writing or plot. :( thank you for the review though!

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very good, i like how this story is going and the lyrics were an excellent touch! :D keep up the good work! 10/10

-Jem-

Author's Response: I'm glad you like how the story is going! :D The lyrics are honestly my favorite part...they kinda drive the story you know? I hope to keep up the good work and hope you continue reading. thanks so much for reviewing!

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It's sad that Hermione turned to the other side. The chanting part was pretty interesting and it was cool to see what you think happens to Death Eaters when they are initiated. Good job. I think it would have been better if you had described the attack more but awesome job nonetheless. 8/10. Thanks for a good read.

Author's Response: sorry if it was sad. :( it is suppose to be a dark fic. I'm glad you liked the chanting! ^_^ I had fun writing the initiation because it's something we really don't know anything about so I could just imagine freely. Don't worry, future chapters will have attacks. :) Thank you so much for reading!

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Wow, all I can say is that it was completely unexpected. Your friends weren't wrong when they said that you could be an author instead. This story isn't really my type, but it really is very intriguing.
~Aly
*and now you have to review my story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to not only read but review this chapter! I'm glad it surprised you. I was definitely going for the "unexpected"ness. :) Sorry it really wasn't your type, but thanks for reviewing anyways. I'll definitely read and review your story now so no worries. :)

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