{reviewid: 2376897, reviewer: 'AssortedButtons'}
11th July 2010:
Very cute and believable. Fantastic, but there's something a little off about the pacing of the story, but don't get me wrong, I loved it! 9/10
Author's Response: Thanks! And you don't have to worry about giving some constructive criticism as well - I'm always looking for ways to improve my writing :)
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{reviewid: 2333843, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
17th April 2010:
this story was fantastic! write a sequel please!^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2315741, reviewer: 'emmykat113'}
17th March 2010:
Is it done? You really should write a sequel. Or have you? I will go look in a minute! =D Great story! 10/10
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{reviewid: 2231395, reviewer: 'black_n_proud_hp4lyf'}
5th October 2009:
awww!! thats so cute...
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{reviewid: 2231274, reviewer: 'spreaddapoo93'}
5th October 2009:
Lovely - funny, cute, romantic and brilliantly written! Enjoyed it every step of the way :D
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{reviewid: 2222151, reviewer: 'Malfoyfriend20'}
22nd September 2009:
aw, that was really cute! I love it!!! *hands you a brownie*
Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^_^
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{reviewid: 2060754, reviewer: 'nire'}
22nd February 2009:
Awww very cute. I like how they are timid with each other. James more so than Lily. He is so confident in so many areas, but when it comes to Lily all rules are broken :)
I like your imagination. It is different to any other I have read before.
Good job once again!
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{reviewid: 1837279, reviewer: 'LilyMaria'}
20th February 2008:
Oh my gosh. You know if you hear something, see a scene, or read a piece of literature that makes your heart beat just a tad bit faster because you can't help but just completely swell with a gushy feeling that is so happy and yet so annoying? I just did that with your story. It was absolutely amazing in every way and I think I'm going to add it to my favorites! If I could, it would be a 1,000 out of 10!
-love-
LM
Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you so much for your kind words. It's rare to get such an emphatic reaction to my writing!
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{reviewid: 1678790, reviewer: 'nana_banana_xx3'}
21st October 2007:
*dies a little*
I thought I might get you to the nice, rounded number of twenty-five. :) Completely adorable story, dear. I quite enjoyed reading it!
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{reviewid: 1646522, reviewer: 'nourie'}
28th September 2007:
Too tired to write a lot but brilliant job on the story. you nailed their presonalitites :D
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{reviewid: 1606742, reviewer: 'A%20Diffrent%20type%20of%20Flower'}
31st August 2007:
Ah i loved it!
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{reviewid: 1581928, reviewer: 'thegoldensnitch'}
18th August 2007:
hehe gd story!
x golden x
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{reviewid: 1564084, reviewer: 'NevunaRomione'}
9th August 2007:
cute
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{reviewid: 1525482, reviewer: 'Someone'}
19th July 2007:
No Offense, but I really didn't like it.
Author's Response: None taken, though I would've appreciated if you'd told me exactly what you didn't like about it
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{reviewid: 1518878, reviewer: 'BlackMoon741'}
17th July 2007:
Mmm. Lovely. ^^ I like how you made Lily kiss him first.
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{reviewid: 1505159, reviewer: 'hpismylove07'}
9th July 2007:
ahhh what happens next?!?! love it!!
seriously, i thought you did an excellent job, your writing skills are exquisite, and i can say you have a serious nack for detail. =)
Author's Response: This review made me smile ^__^ Thank you, and it's good to hear that you think I have a knack for detail as I think that's something I've struggled with in the past
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{reviewid: 1496116, reviewer: '%3A%29'}
4th July 2007:
aww this is such a cute story i love it
Author's Response: Thank you ^__^ It's great to hear that
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{reviewid: 1495283, reviewer: 'California'}
3rd July 2007:
Loved it =] FANTABULAS ENDING!!
Author's Response: Thanks! The ending is my favorite part ^__^
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{reviewid: 1494624, reviewer: 'Divine_Till_Night'}
3rd July 2007:
Cute. Very nice! 10/10 ~Ginny~
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1494578, reviewer: 'al3x'}
3rd July 2007:
wow.that was amazing =]
Author's Response: 'Amazing'? Wow, thank you for the positive feedback!
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{reviewid: 1494236, reviewer: 'StepUpx_Gryffindor'}
3rd July 2007:
that was adorable =-D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so ^__^
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{reviewid: 1494235, reviewer: 'MiniMindy'}
3rd July 2007:
Is there going to be more?
Author's Response: No, unfortunately I only had enough inspiration to make this a one-shot, but thank you for reading and reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1494226, reviewer: 'just%20another%20girl'}
3rd July 2007:
The hopeless romantic in me would like to say, "Ohhh!"
Author's Response: Haha, thank you ^__^ I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
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{reviewid: 1494104, reviewer: 'jkrowling_fan'}
3rd July 2007:
It was great!
I loved it!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you loved it! Thank you for reviewing ^__^
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{reviewid: 1494032, reviewer: 'Starlight%20Sprite'}
3rd July 2007:
lovely!! 10/10
xox Erika Lynn
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it
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