it was good to see a fic about his but i just don't see snape being so nervous. he is accomplished occlumens so he knows how to hide his fear otherwise depending where his loyalties lie dumbledore or voldemort would be able to see that he is lyong them both being able to read minds Author's Response: Yeah, I'd realised the emotions were a little misplaced, but with writer's block when I was trying to write it, I couldn't think of any other way to convey the tension...besides, this is from his own point of view, really, so there ought to be at least a little more insight into his fear than what would normally be given, don't you think? Thanks for the review, anyways, I didn't really think it was much good when I'd finished writing it...if you have any ideas about what I could put in instead, I'd appreciate it... Bron Report Review
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