Other than minor spelling errors, and a few gramatical no-no's, this is a really good fic...I like how clear it is, and your description is marvelous. Great idea...creative...gossip-ish me wishes to know who the father is...hah...
Looking forwards to more,
Chianna Report Review
Ew... Jogging =x.x=
I feel her pain...
James is a jerk for basically blackmailing her to get Lily to go out with him... I thought he was at least somewhat warm hearted...
I like it though, good context...
The dialog is a little weak/unnatural, but I like the story
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Haha, we were talking about having children without having sex in class on Friday... Really awkward, but interesting nonetheless... I like your beginning here, makes you want to know whats going to happen next =^.^= Report Review
OHMIGAH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU! YOU WILL LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT? Geez, lol! I love that she had the babies already, I didn't really want to read a whole whole lot about the pregnancy. Now, I honestly hope that they are Remus's babies because I favor him over Sirius. Sirius would be okay though too. I am still trying to figure out if James's statement should be taken in a mean way or not...
Great job again! And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update ASAP!Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it would be best not to dwell on the pregnacy too much. Ha isn't it funny how dwell is spelt? I just updated sorry I'm late but I'm in the midst of studding and planning my sweet sixteen. Report Review
Okay, first of all this is great! But I'm a wee bit confused on how you can actually get pregnant with TRIPLETS with out having sex. I mean, that must be a bit difficult, but I trust that you have a good explanation. This is obviously set in the marauder time, so I am assuming here that Sirius is one of the guys in that room, but by looking at the pairings is Lupin the other? If so, I love it 'cause I love him, but is he really the type? Ah, well. You did an excellent job and I am faving this! 10/10
Also, thanks for faving my story too! Author's Response: Trust me I have an amazing explanation and it might not be what "Amber" thinks or you think or even what I think. I'll give you a hint I got it from an episode of CSI Las Vegas. Report Review
It's a Virgin Mary to the third degree! BAM! Sorry, I'm a bit of a math nerd and if I could figure out a way to make the Virgin Mary cubed then I would. And what is the six lettered word? I didn't notice any special six letter words in this chapter. Or does it come up later?
=^_^=Author's Response: Maybe it does and maybe it doesn't what's the word? Is it: Sirius? Triplets? Any other 6 lettered words that I can think of. Report Review
PLEASE UPDATE! Author's Response: I will soon. Report Review
haha, she's in trouble, paired with a marauder..Author's Response: Maybe .... Maybe not ... or maybe I'm not sure Report Review
what is the six letter word?? pregnant (8)? triplets (8)? Sirius, possibly?? hmmm. but how do u get pregnant w.o s.i.?? idgi.Author's Response: I'll never tell. SHH!!!! Report Review
It was really interesting, I liked it.. :)Author's Response: Thanks. Report Review
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