cant wait to start part two!! Report Review
i hope ginny is okay!
so glad malfoy has turned over a new leaf, i always knew he was good deep down. Report Review
oh no ):
excellent story though (: Report Review
oh i hope draco turns over to the good side, i can see him changing, and i'm so glad. i do just love draco. (: Report Review
madam rosmerta is from the three broomsticks.
i really love this story! Report Review
oh i always hated draco, but this is really making me love him. even if he is a prick, hes pretty hilarious. great job!! Report Review
oh my, i LOVE this! the tone is exceptional, i can picture everything so clearly! great job! SO glad someone recommended this story in the forums! Report Review
Great story so far! By chance have you seen a very potter musical? Some of the lines remind me of it Report Review
Feedback feedback feedback feedack feedback feedback :PAuthor's Response: -_- You smarty. Haha thanks for the review! :P Report Review
I personally love the format of this story. It is very different from all the other's I've read. All in all, it is very good, I do have a "constructive critism": I know it may sound futile but the phrase could care less should actually be couldn't care less because if you could care less, than you somewhat care about the situation. I don't know if it was a typo of some sort, but I felt like I needed to mention it. Yet it is not really disturbing and the story is really interesting.Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Oops...some people couldn't care less about nuances like this, BUT every writer who is a writerwriter should pay close to attention to these. Thanks for pointing it out!
Thanks for reviewing :D Report Review
No! It's close to 1AM and I've got to get up early tomorrow but damn it, I wanna know if they finally get it out of their system!^^
I know I'm repeating myself, bug oh my God, the way your write is juste perfect!
You made me laugh like mad, I almost cried and got a few times goose-bumps.
Bravo!Author's Response: Aww, getting up early is the pits -_-. Thank you soo much! I doubt it's perfect, but that's wonderful to hear. Hope you didn't cry too much (sorry, and thanks for the review! Report Review
i totally forgot why i looked for this story in the first place! i saw there was a part two and looked for a part one, (even though i didn't read part two,) and discovered an amazing story. as my character in my story, (it's not a fan fiction and I'm still working on it,) would say, "If this story was a cupcake Diamond would have ate it in three seconds!" (diamond's a picky stubborn cat...long story,) but anyway, I LOVE the story and can't wait to get onto the second! 5 million out of ten!Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Glad you could make an amazing discovery :). Haha--silly cat. Thanks a million (or 5 million, rather)! Report Review
my only words are "oh-emm-gee..." the story is bloody fantastic! for some reason i feel like Ginny won't die. but who knows? i mean i could always skip to the end of the story and find out but happens, but it's more fun to read Draco arguing with himself. ^_^ 5,000-out-of-10!Author's Response: Thanks! Lol Eek, don't skip to the end--it'd be awfully confusing. Ah, Draco the arguer...glad you liked it! Report Review
my choice would be, stop being a death eater and accept help from the order and let them protect you! *scowl* he probly wont realize that IZ an option. (yes i choose to miss-spell my wordz) 500/10Author's Response: Your choice just may come true...hope you had the chance to read on! THanks for the review :). [500/10--woot!] Report Review
Love this story. it makes total sense, in Fan Fiction form that is. sry i don't really know what I'm talking about. But your story caused me to say a great "that's what she said". I was looking over the chapter to see how long it was and said, "OK, it's kinda long but not that long," and my friends burst out laughing. but anywayz, LOVE the story! so glad Draco and Hermione are "friends" now, and i can't wait to see what happens about Ginny and everyone else! 500/10!Author's Response: Haha thanks! Sorry for the length...though it seems you're okay with that. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I love chapter one! yay lol xD great start =)Author's Response: Thank you! I say "yay" to this review :). Report Review
It was bloody amazing!! I will continue to read this story till dawn.. WOW!!
and by the way.. I LOVE your disclaimers, they're extremely funny ;)
JPAuthor's Response: Thanks! Till dawn? Flattering, but do get some sleep haha! I really appreciate your review :). Report Review
i loved this story! and i'm going to read the next one also. i like how you, unlike others, slowed them into a friendship instead of being too cliche and making them all of a sudden fall madly in love with eachother. great story keep up the good work!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Precisely the effect I was going for, so this is very encouraging. Report Review
Wooo :D. Nice ending! I would actually give a nice review, but I'm much too anxious to read the second part! Hopefully a lil' more romance will be involved ;).
And I hope Hermione finds out about Lucius killing his mother soon! That's gonna be an interesting scene.
Oh! And I love your Draco, heh. He's cute, and very in-character. He's still whiney and a /little/ immature, but I think that's much more IC compared to the "dark and brooding" Draco that inhibits most of the Dramione stories throughout fanfiction.
10/10! (And I don't do that very often)Author's Response: WOW! Thanks for the wonderful review (yes, it is!). Ooh, more romance to come, fo sho. I'm so happy you like this Draco! I'm afraid I've turned him into a hopeless romantic...but hopefully, he'll stay IC, anyhow. Thanks for the 10/10! It means so much :). Report Review
"No. I don't feel like killing you today."
Lol, great line ^_^.
I'm enjoying your story so far! It's interesting. Usually I don't like diary-entry formats, but you turn it into a first person story format throughout it so I'm dealing with it :). Draco's an ass - nice going! Most people soften him up too much. -keeps reading-Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it so far...though he does soften up eventually--I hope you'll think it's believable. Heck yes--he's KA. LOVE Draco. Thanks again! Report Review
hehehehe its the longest greatest journal entery lolAuthor's Response: Haha...bet his hand hurt after writing it. Report Review
well that was an interesting last entry was a little confused at the end that was still good though im gona go to the second part now :DAuthor's Response: hmm...*reads over the chapter*...yep. The ending's a bit confusing, sorry! Report Review
ohhh nice chapter well that was definitely an interesting chapterAuthor's Response: thanks! :) Report Review
that was an interesting chapter very interesting
oh man i wish harry hadnt hit draco but instead followed ZABINI god Harry is a idiotAuthor's Response: Well, if you look at it from Harry's perspective, he had perfectly good reason to believe Draco was Ginny's threat...but he sure regrets not chacing after Blaise later. Report Review
woaa shoot that was an intense nice chapter i cant belive he got crucio-d so many times wowAuthor's Response: Yep, Voldy's cruel. thanks for all these reviews! Report Review
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