Very cute story! I loved it. The plot was very unique and the story quite well-written. Great job!

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Aww. That was a very good story. I loved it! Very well written. :D

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OH MY GOD !
This is seriously the BEST fanfic I've ever written, it was just too perfect!

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Yay! He didn't freak out! You do a very good job of staying canon to the characters. I'm looking for to the next chapter!

-Dem

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Once again, amazing. This awesome. I can't wait to read on.

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You know what I like about your story? It's realistic. All the descriptions of the feelings and reactions and everything that they are sharing...it's very real. Honestly, it reminds me of when I started dating my boyfriend. The awkward conversations, the exhilieration touching the other brought, everything. You really capture the fact that even though they live in a fantasy world, they are still teenagers that deal with the same things that we do.

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Yay! He's catching on! Even if only in his daydreams. >.>

I think Ron would beat Harry up if he squeezed his knee. hehe

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Haha, this is so funny. I love it.

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Hahaha, "over her left shoulder - but never on her." That was priceless. I actually laughed out loud. Nice, I'm excited to read on. Though the chapter was rather short. :(

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Yay, that was absolutely brilliant! A perfect 23rd birthday present! Haha, I loved it, great work!

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Wow that was close! Love it! Really great!

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Yay! Ug, I hate Brown! She's so mean!

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I'm really liking this, it's really good!

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Wow, this is awesome! It's so fluffy! Perfect thing to read on my birthday! Haha!

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Oh wow, this could go wrong in so many ways. haha!

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Haha, great start, love it!

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omg i love this story, it's definetily one of my faves.
RON AND HERMIONE 4EVA!!

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please continue its great i love it very romantic!
-iliana

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Nice! I think it's an intriguing plot you have here, and you're story is very easy to read. It flows pretty smoothly and you can see all the little imperfections with the characters, which makes it even more interesting.

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i really like this whole story its really cute i think you should keep going!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I do have a couple more chapters in mind and hope to get the next one up soon - work permitting!

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CONTINUE!

Author's Response: Continued...

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YOU SHOULD DEFANLLY CONTINUE I LOVE THIS STORY WRIGHT MORE A.S.A.P! and this chapter was funny!!! ron and hermione are cute!!!

Author's Response: More on the way...as requested :-)

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Oh, yay, I'm glad you're going to keep writing. It's such a cute story, I'm really enjoying it.

Author's Response: Happy to be of service :-)

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Hermione's little breakdown was hilarious to read about. Great job with it, it really suited both her and Ron's character perfectly. I really enjoyed this story, it was so cute and funny and light hearted. This would be a great place to end it, but I've grown attached to it as well! If you are willing to write more, then go for it; if not, then we can deal with it ending right here. Great job, I'll be on the look out for more of your stories!

Author's Response: I thought it was needed. Although I like the 'polyjuice' premise for this story I was always a little uneasy about Hermione jumping so quickly at Ginny's idea - it seemed a little OOC. So it felt right to add in a little bit of guilt and angst further down the line - to balance things out a bit :-)

I can't quite let this story go yet, even though I reached my original goal for it. I've been tempted to write one or two more chapters and move my ending from their first kiss to something else, so...watch this space :-)

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that was like always. awesome!
WRITE MORE PLEASE

Author's Response: How could I refuse such a review :-)

Watch this space...

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