More action definately. And don't give, although I do think you have started too many stories at the same time. 10/10

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This was nice. You should update it soon!

Author's Response: Thanks I will! Soon! :)

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great prologue! Short but really well done! Please update! Cant leave me hanging like this!

Tess

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AWWW... you really need to update...i am begging you to update...i want to read on, so, therefore, I am asking you to UPDATE! I like how you began this story, I rarely read stories of James and lily 'taking a break' but I love all ur other stories I felt like 'why not?' and now I am not regretting my decision. I rlly like the beginning, so please continue!!!
lol
dont think me blonde, but who said:
"I...I think we need a break."?
I couldnt tell, though I have a hunch, but anyway
please continue this story, I want to read more
till whenever
*dont have a name*
10/10

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I like it! I think it's fine the way it is but my opinion may change later on. Please update soon! X)

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Oh, I like. This has potential. I love how James hates Lily talking to her guy friends, yet he shamelessy flirts with other girls and doesn't think that it upsets Lily. Is James really her first boyfriend? Will you do flashbacks of how they got together, cause that would be interesting.

I like the bit about irony, pure, merciless irony. It sets the scene well.

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it's a great start. i could use a little more drama in it. can't wait for the next chapter. keep it up.

Author's Response: Drama?? Okie dokie. More drama on the way =D


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This story caught my attention when I saw you wrote because I love your stories :) I think its great so far even if its just a prologue.. its interesting. I like it. I have an idea too: James and Lily take that break and end up having another girl/boy friend but then they realise that they miss each other and they really do love each other... Just a thought...

Author's Response: I already know whats going to happen but thanks for the review anyway

~*Ashley*~
xXx

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i loved this! keep it going

Author's Response: =D

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that was great! i can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thanks!

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