{reviewid: 1781171, reviewer: 'casa_bella'}
6th January 2008:
awww come on! post the next chapter!!!
thanks,
Lisa
Author's Response: I will, hopefully soon because I'm getting very excited about putting everything together that I planned for.
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{reviewid: 1752436, reviewer: 'Ame%28lia%21%29'}
14th December 2007:
Hi!
wow. wow!
I am totally in love with this story!
please write more soon!
Ame
Author's Response: Thank you I going to try write a couple more chapters soon. I'm just trying to think of a great way to end it
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{reviewid: 1630108, reviewer: 'lyramoon'}
15th September 2007:
cute. update soon! :)
Author's Response: I'll try but I'm not sure when I'll be able to
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{reviewid: 1630104, reviewer: 'lyramoon'}
15th September 2007:
drawing? haha that's funny...cant wait for krum to come!
Author's Response: ha ha yeah...drawing...
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{reviewid: 1630099, reviewer: 'lyramoon'}
15th September 2007:
hmm. i like longer chapters. it seems like such a pain to read like a couple paragraphs and have to click on the next chapter. haha.
now more constructive critism. i think your imagery is okay, try and elaborate more though. don't be afraid to think that readers will get bored reading description. at the most they probably will just skip over it haha. i find stories a lot more interesting with description.
Author's Response: I know the description is bad I can do better. Thanks for your review.
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{reviewid: 1610379, reviewer: 'CharmedKindaLife'}
2nd September 2007:
oo
very nice
i like it alot!
please update this is fab!!
love your graphics too :]
gem xx
Author's Response: I know I love the graphics didn't they do a great job? I'll try to update, that writer's block of mine is gone. But now I don't have as much time. I will write it when I do though!
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{reviewid: 1593569, reviewer: 'dark-lord--happy-pants'}
24th August 2007:
YAY for u for writing this fic!1
u rock!
very good fic!
Author's Response: That really brightens my day. I'll try and add another chapter soon.
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{reviewid: 1592650, reviewer: 'onestop_hpfan18'}
23rd August 2007:
i like this story. it's well thought-out. great job. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you like it. I love it when you review.
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{reviewid: 1592608, reviewer: 'onestop_hpfan18'}
23rd August 2007:
this is a great first fanfic. i liked how you hit ron and hermione's love-hate relationship head-on. well, i'm going to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, I try my best.
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{reviewid: 1582701, reviewer: 'durmastrang_fluer'}
18th August 2007:
Hmm, interesting. You just need to look over your punctuation and dialouge. Some of its all over the place, you just need to look it over again. Sorry but critiscm is very good to us writer though!
Do forgive
love ya,
~d_f
7/10
Author's Response: Yes I know puncation is probably my biggest weekness.
Thanks for your review.
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{reviewid: 1578361, reviewer: 'RnHrJenn'}
16th August 2007:
good job, keep them coming!
Author's Response: Thanks I'll try to get another chapter in.
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{reviewid: 1578358, reviewer: 'RnHrJenn'}
16th August 2007:
i love R/HR!
Author's Response: Yes they were meant to be.
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{reviewid: 1578352, reviewer: 'RnHrJenn'}
16th August 2007:
good job
Author's Response: Thank you :D
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{reviewid: 1559321, reviewer: 'the%20nutty%20imp'}
7th August 2007:
You have more descriptions on this chapter which is good. When Krum pronounces her name as Herm-own-ninny or Hermy-own-ninny I alwayd did found it funny. Well at least you showed that he made an effort :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I've been trying to get more description. I'm usually pretty good at it...
I found his pronounciation funny too! I might change it to that... I seriously just put it the way I did because I completely forgot how his accent sounded!
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{reviewid: 1559315, reviewer: 'the%20nutty%20imp'}
7th August 2007:
Good characterizations of Hermione and Ron. :)
Author's Response: :D tee hee some people thought my Hermione was too mean
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{reviewid: 1559310, reviewer: 'the%20nutty%20imp'}
7th August 2007:
Interesting plot line. I always did find Krum interesting :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I always found Krum interesting too.
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{reviewid: 1557592, reviewer: 'do%20u%20wuv%20me%3F'}
6th August 2007:
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Author's Response: ha ha I love your enthusiasm but unfortunately I'm having a major case of Writer's Block :(. I'll try really hard to get something soon though.
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{reviewid: 1554376, reviewer: 'thestrallover5713'}
4th August 2007:
Everything is fine except you're confusing his accent with Fleur's and Hagrid's.
Author's Response: Yes, Krum's accent is bad...I'm going to edit this chapter soon so it should be better.
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{reviewid: 1554371, reviewer: 'thestrallover5713'}
4th August 2007:
I like that it gives you just enough info to keep you hanging on. A really great part is the way you capture everyone's personalities.
Author's Response: Thank you :D that brightened my day!
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{reviewid: 1554353, reviewer: 'thestrallover5713'}
4th August 2007:
I loved it! I also liked the setting. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate your review!
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{reviewid: 1551426, reviewer: 'FallingApart'}
3rd August 2007:
good job please update soon!
Author's Response: I'll try, unfortunately I'm having major writer's block right now @_@
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{reviewid: 1514138, reviewer: 'HappiestTragedy'}
14th July 2007:
its a little akward. but i definitely laughed out loud for some of the parts. just review what you write (thats what i do to myself obsessively)... if something doesn't sound right... then fix it until it does.
bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you! Right now I'm having a beta look at it so it should sound better. Hopefully I'll have the edited chapters and a new one somtime after the DA thing.
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{reviewid: 1512189, reviewer: 'copperandtodd4ever'}
13th July 2007:
EXCELLENT! Please update soon. Ron must be REALLY mad. And 10 is the highest the rating can go, right?
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it. That makes me so happy!
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{reviewid: 1509804, reviewer: 'ellyfant'}
12th July 2007:
PLEASE update soon
Author's Response: I'll try, right now I'm having a severe form of writer's block!
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{reviewid: 1509738, reviewer: 'hprbdfan'}
12th July 2007:
please keep on going!!!
Author's Response: I will ;)
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