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Review #1, by Danie Prism

13th November 2008:
Awww so cute and sad! I love it! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, Danie! :)

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Review #2, by GoCalgaryFlamesGo Prism

1st January 2008:
Gah, Brandi this is fantastic. You made the characters so realistic and believable and you gave Bella an inch of humanity!

Seriously, this was so powerful and emotional and great job :D

10/10

And little 'Tonia is proud of you :P

Author's Response: Wow, thanks Antonia! *is shocked that she read this*

I'm glad you liked the story, as it's my personal favorite.

*wonders if it's a bad thing that little 'Tonia is proud of her*


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Review #3, by angelmaple Prism

29th December 2007:
okay... next time I read about anyone 'bad' I'd be thinking about their pain, and the past that made them who they are... you really make me emotional... esp. the little details from their childhood, it's just... so melancholy and even ironic to think about in conjunction with what Bella and Cissy's had to do... *tear*

Author's Response: Ah...this is my personal favorite out of all my fanfics.

I thought this one was a good deal more moving than the others considering that it had to do with sisterly bonds and loyalty and all that. I like to think of it as similar to MoP because of that, actually.

*hands over tissue* Sorry, but I'm rather glad you've got a little tear. It makes me happy thinking that I've done this story correctly.

Thanks for the wonderful reviews!


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Review #4, by Valarie7505 Prism

28th December 2007:
10-10 thats was good sad and good

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought so!

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Review #5, by Chilee Prism

17th December 2007:
woah. this is well written. sad what Cissy had to do. she was the center of the two extremes that were her sisters.
like how we get to see lord V's character and what he does to those around him, even if he is not in the story.
nice one

Author's Response: This is actually my favorite story on here, so thank you so much!

Well, in my story summary, I think I mention that this is Cissy and Bella's first ever mission for the Dark Lord, so...this was Voldemort's way of testing thier loyalty to him.

Even though it's not canon anymore due to DH, I'm still glad you enjoyed it. :)


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Review #6, by Gillian Moynihan Prism

22nd October 2007:
Wow. Wow. WOW!!! This is awesome!!! You made Bellatrix seem human! You gave them characters. Everything is brilliant. Keep up the good work and keep writing!

P.S. - I felt so sad when Bella took the prism. :'( She still cares!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much!

I'm glad you thought Bella seemed human, of the three sisters she often seems the coldest, so...

Yeah.

Thank you!


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Review #7, by kiwigirl Prism

24th September 2007:
omg, that is so sad! i teared up.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. This was supposed to be an emotional piece, so it's nice to hear that you teared up a bit. *hands her a box of tissues* I'm not being mean! I'm just happy that my point got across. Thanks for the review!

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Review #8, by xSirius will never diex Prism

29th August 2007:
That's so sweet. I noticed one problem. Ted Tonks is actually Muggle. Not a Mudblood.

Author's Response: Actually, Ted tonks IS a muggleborn. It was mentioned in OotP and is made VERY clear in DH. I'm glad you thought it was sweet though.

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Review #9, by dragonlovesh2o4eva Prism

17th August 2007:
wow. i quiet liked this story! it's not like any others i've read and i liked your take on it!

I felt so sorry for bella and Narcissa, it was so sad, imagine having to kill your own sister!!!

anyway, i loved it! changing the pov did get a little confusing though...anyway 10/10

what i wanted to ask you though was do you want a banner for this story? If you do just visit my author page and my email is there!

cheers

Author's Response: Sorry about the confusion...i've been hearing that from other people and i'm still trying to figure out a way to change it...

A banner would be cool, but i have no idea how to post one up here...i'll look into it. Thanks for reviewing! and thank you even more for enjoying it!


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Review #10, by Varda Prism

17th August 2007:
I'm logged out. ;)

I loved this, it was lovely. I really enjoyed getting inside each of the sisters' minds.

Oh, you said "the cherry red house on the corner" twice. You might want to rephrase the second time. ;)

I honestly don't think Bellatrix would be drinking orange juice, but it's your story. :)

I loved the sisterly bonds. Especially Bellatrix's emotions. :)

Good job.

Take care,
Varda/Alex/Super Simran ( LOL ) ;)

Author's Response: hm, i'll have to look at the house description again...

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! And hey, Bella has to drink SOMETHING in the morning, eh? ;)


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Review #11, by lilyandjamesfan Prism

14th August 2007:
wow that was really powerful. the emotions are really strong and i like how you have a bit from each sister. i also like how you put the prism in the end. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! Even though this is AU as of DH, I think this was my favorite one shot...

Thanks so much!


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Review #12, by Elf_ears13 Prism

6th August 2007:
I love the recurring images of the prism and Narcissa hugging Andromeda, and, though we now know this isn't canon (and I don't think Narcissa ever got the Dark Mark), I still love the betrayal. You captured each of their voices just right, though I'm usually not a fan of switching points of view. I was afraid you'd get Bella too emotional or sentimental, and though she was both of the above, I still think you pulled it off without pushing her into the out-of-character realm. The emotions and dynamics between the three were just beautifully done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Elfears! The switching POVs was part of the challenge, but I wouldn't have done it any other way looking back. And I'm glad you thought Bella was done right, I was afraid of making her a tad OOC, but still, I'm glad you liked her. :)

I always thought Narcissa was a DE...just because...oh well, thank you for the review!!!


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Review #13, by Tonks_girl_4eva Prism

10th July 2007:
I am so glad i stumbled upon this fic, it must be one of the most well written and one of my favourite fics so far. I loved how you showed each character's point of view. I loved how it was Narcissa who killed in the end, although it was sad that she had to. I've always believed that Bella was, and is, more loyal to her sisters than to Voldemort, this fic was a perfect portrayal of that sisterly love. Well done, this is definitely going on my favourites!

Author's Response: This has just made my day...i'm so glad that people are reading this! Of all my fics, this is the least read and has the least amount of reviews...but...well, I know I shouldn't, but it kind of is my favorite...so far...I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

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Review #14, by MissLee_ Prism

10th July 2007:
Oh my god! WOW! I adore fics like this (I'm not sadistic I swear! hahaha) the mixture of happy memories made it heart wrentching! I loved that it was Narcissa in the end that killed Andromeda, because seeing as Bellatrix is a bit sadistic she'd be the one you expect to do it. And it was quite surprising too :D I love the Black sisters, and I think you illustrated their personalities perfectly, in particular Narcissa and Bellatrix. And you showed that Bellatrix does have a heart dep down :P

The only thing I had an issue with was that the first time you changed who was speaking I didn't quite get who it was at first, but it didn't take me long to understand the pattern, it was like everytime there was a memory afterwards it would change who was speaking.

I loved this :D 10/10 and I'm adding it to my favourites :)

-MissLee!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry about the confusion, I was trying to make it so it wasn't difficult to figure out who was next, and you were right that was the pattern...

i'm so happy you're adding this to favorites, i'm not entirely sure if I'm allowed to have a favorite story, but I think this one is...even though it has the fewest number of reads and reviews, it was my favorite to write.


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Review #15, by Lily Opal Evans Prism

25th June 2007:
wow. that was amazing and spine chilling. the atmosphere you set was fantastic! you could sense all the pain and misery. poor tonks! this storyr was fantastic

Author's Response: Thank you! This is quite possibly my favorite, although I love all my stories...

It's still has to be my favorite.

I'm glad you liked it, and i'm glad you liked the atmosphere. I don't really write a lot of description of the background, so I really hope that people get what the atmosphere is liek from the way the characters are acting...

Thanks for the review, Lily!


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Review #16, by slytherinprincess_xox Prism

23rd June 2007:
amazing. capitivating :D 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #17, by Apollyon Prism

12th June 2007:
Poor Andie... It was surprising to me that in the end it was Narcissa who did the deed, but it makes sense. Liked it a lot.

Author's Response: Ha, it's funny to me that you read my least favorite and my most favorite stories that I've written. Incidently they're both my one-shots. I liked this one...I'm not sure if it's completely canon with Anda's death and all, but that's fanfiction for you. I wanted a twist and Narcissa was the best I could come up with, so thanks. And thanks for swinging by to see my stories, I wasn't entirely sure if you'd like them...you seem like the action type whereas my stories are pretty much drama, but thanks anyways, I appreciate it.

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Review #18, by holly bergman Prism

10th June 2007:
...oh my. That was really well written. Though I'm sure Andromeda is still alive...this was really brilliant. You have me breathless at the end of it.

Author's Response: Is she still alive? I wasn't sure, but well, it's fanfiction anyways...thanks for reviewing!

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Review #19, by JazRox Prism

10th June 2007:
That was good :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #20, by T vivacious Prism

7th June 2007:
Brilliant characterization; true to canon, but you make it your own and its endearing. Like Bellatrix going against the Dark Lord to warn her sister, and caring about the wedding invitation, she is very passionate so it would make sense her first problem would be not being trusted by someone she loves dearly. Narcissa does seem like the type who hates her loved ones in pain, and when driven to the brink can rise to the occasion.

I loved the second to the last line, "I'm tired, and I do like my sleep." because it ties the sisters together, and the fact that Andromeda kept the prism. Sisterly love.

This was so great! 10/10 for you! Thanks so much for writing it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! And for making this challenge! I had already had the idea for this floating around, but wasn't sure how to do it. Your challenge helped to push it in the right direction. Thanl you!

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Review #21, by Wingless Prism

5th June 2007:
Oh my God. Oh my God. What have you done to me? Oh.. This was so emotional! I can barely take how emotional this piece is! GOODNESS. This deserves a 10/10. No, something akin to 100/10. Or 1000/10. The intensity of Bellatrix, Andromeda, and Narcissa was overwhelming, battling it out with the tension! I had a feeling it would be Narcissa; I just guessed when Bellatrix started to get teary. It's what I would've done too, if I'd been writing this. :P Even though I had a feeling, I was still shocked! Shocked to the point of tears, but luckily none fell. BUT GOODNESS. Those few moments where Andromeda falls just reminded me of Sirius falling for some reason. I imagined it as an arc when you described it.. It was BEAUTIFUL. Hauntingly BEAUTIFUL. I love how emotional Narcissa is and how stoic Bellatrix is in the beginning. It added a sort of depth to your already-deep story.

This story is near flawless, but there only about two things that jumped out at me.

'Although the picture doesn’t show it, I know what it was, it was a prism.' I do believe that's a run-on sentence.. It just kinda leapt out at me. :P

'..she couldn’t bare to see anyone..' I think you mean 'bear'?

Anyways... THIS WAS SUPERB! Utterly fantastic. :) My own submission to this challenge seems kinda bleak in comparison to yours now! Envious, envious...

Author's Response: Whoo, thanks for the review! And thank you very much for catching those errors, I'll be sure to fix them up. You're reviews are amazing, I love getting them...they're always so nice!!! Thank you again!

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Review #22, by Queen_Lucy Prism

5th June 2007:
I loved it!
10/10

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!

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