Very cute story! I love listening to his thoughts :) Report Review
Nice story. I liked it a lot.
But I'm still gonna rag you about 'that other, unfinished story'. :-)
What can I say? It's good!
Robert Report Review
Oh my gosh that was so great.
I love the ending. I was laughing so hard at the last comment.Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review, I'm pleased you enjoyed the story, and I thought that last line funny too. Report Review
Another wonderful story from you. This would be a good story to continue.Author's Response: I concur with you on this one, I think a sequel is just what this needs. thanks for the input Report Review
Loved it! Really good! It could have even been a multi-chaptered story. As in, expand it. but w/e, it was great. Good plot and everything. I wouldn't object to a sequel, lol!! Author's Response: Hi, I have been giving some thought to your request, though I have not yet done anything about a sequel I do have a couple of ideas. thanks for the review Report Review
I loved it! Verry original! Really inspiring! I LOVED IT WHOLE HEARTEDLY!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review, it always gives me a buz when my work is liked. Report Review
oh my god this is so good and so funny cant wait for more Author's Response: Thanks again for a good review. Report Review
0.0 very nice con grats!Author's Response: Thank you for your nice comments, so pleased you liked it. once again thanks for the review Report Review
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