ohh so good! i love neville, specially after the 7th book! i want more!Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
That. Was. AWESOME! Agh! That was friggin' amazing, Rachel. And you say that I can write?!? Psh, that was awesome. A testmant to the sweet, wonderful and now brave Neville. It was purely genius and I applaude you for that!
Lindsey xoxAuthor's Response: Lol!! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks. **Feels embarassed, but in a cool way**
No, really you can write!! The Hermione one shot you did was- words can't explain it!!.
Anyway, thanks again. I love Neville. He's a cool character to play around with. **Smiles from the applause, though she feels she does not deserve it.**
Thanks so much!!!!!
Rachel xox Report Review
That's a great story! You gave Bella her hysterical nature, as so many authors (I stand guilty) fail to do! And Neville was as brave as he is in the books, with a touch of fear, which is quite a delicate and difficult balance. My only problem is that Narcissa was hysterical when she learned Draco's first mission in the books, don't you think she'd be the same when she learns of his second mission. Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Vatina!! Yeah, I wanted to try and display her madness. Umm, yeah I suppose. I wrote her as kind of hopeless, despairing- Nothing would ever work sort of character. She has surrended to the Dark Lord, because she knows there is no way out. As Lupin said, 'You don't just hand in your resignation to Voldemort. It's a lifetime of service, or death.' Anyway, thanks for your comments. They were really helpful, and I may edit a few things. :) Report Review
Wow, that was really good. It was extremely dark and a lot of emotion came through. Great job. Author's Response: Thanks GriffinClaw. You've reviewed so many fics of mine. I'm coming over to your account soon. Yeah I wanted to make this story as dark as it could possibly be and yet try and keep Draco in character. Thanks again!! x :) Report Review
ooh, that was really good. poor neville..Author's Response: Hi again!! Thanks. I know, why does poor Neville have to get the grief? Maybe if Harry had come, they would have stood a chance at defeating both Bellatrix and Narcissa. x :) Report Review
I love Neville. Nicely done. I like how you stuck to Canon and didn't let Neville have the heart to actually kill someone. He's too nice for that.Author's Response: Thanks!!! Yeah, I had to, otherwise as you so rightly pointed out it would not have been in canon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing and glad you enjoyed it!! :) Report Review
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