This chapter's so good, it's an AWESOME beginning to what looks like a really well written story.Author's Response: aw... thanks! sorry to say i doubt i'll be finishing it... i can't seem to get back into it now i know what happens... i'm very bad at that.. but thanks for reading. and reviewing
i love it.
=]Author's Response: thanx, next chapter is posted, just waiting for validation, unfortunately, i had a little mishap, it seems they didn't sleep after the gringotts disaster, but i'm gonna pretend like they did. thanx for the review, keep reading
please write moreAuthor's Response: wtf, who is this? Report Review
Good, I think it is a little funny.Author's Response: thanx, i guess, ya, its nothing like deathly hallows, and from now on it is gonna be really bad, like, i have no imagination for what might have been, just what might be, u know? i get an idea in my head and i can't get it out, but thanx, and keep reviewin, it DOES help Report Review
A good start to the first story. Even though I don't like snoggy love stories I think it is a good first chapter.Author's Response: o! thanx, ya, sometimes i don't like the ones that move to fast either, or the really fluffy ones, but i felt i had 2, i just wanted 2 get it done with fast, cuz i figured none of them would hold out, so haha! i was sooo wrong, anyway, thanx Report Review
Nice Beginning! Could be good if you keep it up. I'm picky about this stuff, but watch out for little mistakes like spelling, or punctuation.Author's Response: well, thanx for the encouragement! if u want to help me with those little mistakes, then be my guest, but it would help if u made an account, so u could help, btw, that was not the kind of review i told u to leave, u person!jk Report Review
Hmmm. Interesting start, deffiently one that I will keep an eye on.
Keep it going.Author's Response: thanx, i am trying to figure out what to do for the next chapter, i am trying to figure out what i even want, but, i hope it will be good, i know this one went kind of fast Report Review
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