What a false face the Blacks present to the world! Each and every one of them trained how to be perfect, what to say, how to act... and it is just what I imagined! Good work! Report Review
I like this. I like reading narcissa fics every once in awhile, and your writing is briliant. it's very descriptive and flows very smoothly...
I like how you've portrayed Narcissa, but I think Lucius might have been a bit overdone. If he really is only 11, I imagine him to be more like Draco had been as a first year, not nearly so...suave as that. It's something I would expect form someone much, much older...even for a Malfoy, it seems a bit much...
But other than that, this story looks like its going off to a great start. I hope to read more soon...and maybe another chapter for Ward 49 as well?
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oh!!! brilliant! 11-year-old Lucius is already quite cute! please do continue!can't wait till the next chapter! I like Cissy too! pretending to be cold suits her!...when it's appealing to Lulu...Author's Response: Eep, thank you for reviewing.
It really means a lot, I signed on thinking, 'Gee, I bet have no new reviews. Why do I waste my time? *sigh*'
So you made my night.
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