Well, I read this before it was posted, but I thought I'd leave a nice little review anyway! :) I love this story and I haven't read any from Peter's point of view from Halloween. It's great- keep up the good work! XD Report Review
Well-written, but it feels a bit... fake. Like you're trying too hard to justify his actions. And it could be elaborated a lot more, I think.
Nice job, despite that. As a Peter enthusiast, I'm pleased. Keep it up.
Last LaughAuthor's Response: Thanks for the great critique! =) I'll remember that next time. Report Review
wow, that was really good. It's a really nice take on how Peter might have actually be feeling, it's so sad though. I really like the way you seemed to get into Peter's thoughts and feelings and portray the way you envisioned his charecter so flawlessly. Good job! I'm so surprised I'm only the third review for this story, it's really good.Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the great review. ^_^ Report Review
Sorry wrong rating, here ya go! Report Review
Hmm...The style of your writing kept me reading past the first few lines. Wish the chapter was longer though. Can't wait to read more!
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