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Reading Reviews for They Live In Godric's Hollow

5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by AKALily

23rd December 2007:

Well, I read this before it was posted, but I thought I'd leave a nice little review anyway! :) I love this story and I haven't read any from Peter's point of view from Halloween. It's great- keep up the good work! XD

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Review #2, by Last Laugh

Betrayal

28th September 2007:

Well-written, but it feels a bit... fake. Like you're trying too hard to justify his actions. And it could be elaborated a lot more, I think.

Nice job, despite that. As a Peter enthusiast, I'm pleased. Keep it up.

Last Laugh

Author's Response: Thanks for the great critique! =) I'll remember that next time.

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Review #3, by wazlibsgrl

Betrayal

25th July 2007:

wow, that was really good. It's a really nice take on how Peter might have actually be feeling, it's so sad though. I really like the way you seemed to get into Peter's thoughts and feelings and portray the way you envisioned his charecter so flawlessly. Good job! I'm so surprised I'm only the third review for this story, it's really good.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the great review. ^_^

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Review #4, by steph_RAWR

Betrayal

9th June 2007:

Sorry wrong rating, here ya go!

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Review #5, by steph_RAWR

Betrayal

9th June 2007:

Hmm...The style of your writing kept me reading past the first few lines. Wish the chapter was longer though. Can't wait to read more!

Cheers,
Steph

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