Reading Reviews for Behind The Lighteningbolt Scar
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Review #1, by Rupertluver2012 ...Some Run. We Fight...

4th September 2007:
freaking brilliant.
great job :]



Author's Response: aw, thanks so much love!!!


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Review #2, by LovelyMioneWeasley ...Some Run. We Fight...

1st September 2007: was so awesome . I loved the words in was so powerful and gave the story that much more oompf. It was a purely amazing plot. This was completely magnificant and flowed perfectly. I had to say though that I like this final battle better than the one in the book. Sh...don't tell anyone I said that though because...its the truth, but I don't want it spreading. This perhaps the best take I've read on the actual Final Battle. Amazing job! 10/10
xx Lindsey

Author's Response: wow, you have no idea how long I spent on this story, so it's great to hear that you like it!! xD I took out so much time to write it and I was so proud lol. It didn't win anything, but I thought it was good for a first writers duel!

lol!! well, the final battle in the book was kinda disappointing I think, but whatever. I've always been for action, and I think this story might appeal a little more then the oringinal ending for some people because it's got a bit more action.

not that I can write action very well, but that's a different story lol.

thanks for the amazing review darling!!! xD xxxx

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Review #3, by BatSEnecal ...Some Run. We Fight...

13th June 2007:
That was one of the best entries that I read! That was fantastic. It was very visual, stunning. I saw the entire thing like a movie in my head. BEAUTIFUL!

Author's Response: aw THANK YOU!

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Review #4, by KristenBlack ...Some Run. We Fight...

10th June 2007:
OMG that was totally wicked! It's such a crime that you only have two other reviews! Obviously, people were so stunned when they read this that they were unable to express their amazement in words! I loved how you got rid of Voldermort, and how you ended it witch Scar, which is how J.K.R. said she would. That was defeintly one of the most realistic(in harry Potter realism) stories I've ever read. 45984792375235/10!

Author's Response: oh my gosh thank you so much :) wow! that made me really happy reading that. I'm so glad you liked it :)

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Review #5, by Timechild ...Some Run. We Fight...

9th June 2007:
Nicely done.

I like the concept of having a new type of spell to defeat Voldemort. Makes for a more interesting story.

Loved the detail you put into all of it.

Overall well done

Author's Response: aw, thank you :)

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Review #6, by ElissandrAnne ...Some Run. We Fight...

4th June 2007:
It was really good. I liked the hopeful tone at the end when I read it during the Writer's Duel. It's over and Harry is still alive, and freer than anyone else. I so want this to happen in DH!

You wrote Harry's feelings and emotions very well. He's tired, but not hopeless. He knows he's fighting for the living, but also for the dead. I liked that. Good job! 10/10

Author's Response: aw, wow, thank you.
I didn't win like I hoped ( i think that was what everyone hoped) but the winning story is amazing, and everyone else had really good stories.
it's just great to hear that you liked it :) makes me feel great lol

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