I've read almost all your stories, including the one with Sirius and the Ravenclaw Seeker, and they are all very well portrayed. You don't botch the characters, nor butcher their feelings to death. I'd give these a 10 any day.

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This is so good but so SAD!!!:( :( why did they have to die? WHY!

Author's Response: You know Voldemort was PMSing and when that happens .Thank you for reviewing!

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aw so sweet. I liked this chapter too, and the way it paralleled (sp?) the last one. Creative and original, I really liked it!

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Really powerful story. Perfect combination of heaviness/humour, for lack of a better term, even though it wasn't entirely true to the book. Haha, Sirius hit on Professor McGonagall! That's funny, and all the other scenes from James life that are flashing before his eyes were good too.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! I tried to keep it close to the book but that would have killed some of it.

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Both chapters were relatively short, but there was so much emotion! I would have loved to see this develop more, but you definitely brought tears to my eyes. :']] Good Job.

Author's Response: This was literally the first thing I wrote and i decided it needed to be edited. So i'm sorry it was short but i'm glad you still liked it!

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that was so sad but good good job

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Meh this is a story with a great plot, but you didn't really give us enough information in my opinion.
Also, there were many grammar and spelling mistakes..

But apart from that the idea was excellent so i reckon a good 7/10 :D:D

Author's Response: Thanks but it's not really a story it's just two one shots plopped together.

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This is so sad. :'(
You write really well.

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This story made me cry! A fanfiction has never made me cry! That was so sad...but I loved it!!!

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hehehe sirus got drunk and hit on proffesor mcgonagle tats rele funny lol

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that is so sad.

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wow

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This is a sad fic, but I like it. My only qualm (and this is coming from someone who spends *way* too much time on HP Lexicon) is that some of the ages for the map and, well I think only hte map were slightly off.

ok, i don't think anyone else would care.

I *loved* that Sirius hitting on McGonagall made it into his last flash of his life.

Author's Response: I know right? Only Sirius would have the balls to hit on McGongall.


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very good, but that is not Robbie Jarvis on your banner

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Aw, that was good! Are you going to do a short story about everyone and their thoughts before they died?!?

Author's Response: Yeah but i'm adding a spin to certain parts like when harry dies what happens before and what happens when lily and james die what do they see and stuff like that.


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good i guess

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hey there-i like your idea with the whole after life thing. i wondered the same thing.

Author's Response: i know right? believe me it will come back to effect harry in the final battle.

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