WOW! I like it, a bit predictable in the beggining of the first chapter, then the story twists when you continue to the present time, in chapter 2.
nice, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Love you, Heidi. xoxAuthor's Response: Glad you liked that part =) Unfortunately, this is on an indefinite hiatus, so idk when that'll be. Thanks for the review! Report Review
That was good! I was a little bit nervous at the beginning, when Hermione said she wanted Harry to die. So was this a dream from the past? Or just a nightmare? I'm going to read the next chapter!Author's Response: What is a dream really, but a subconcious manifestation of reality? Thanks for reviewing, and you'll find out in future chapters :) Report Review
so she really did almost join the death eaters but why? or am i understanding it wrong. please update soon.Author's Response: That's part of the twist. :) mwahaha Report Review
where's the next chapterAuthor's Response: It hasn't been written yet. Report Review
Wow! Is there going to be more chapters? This is really convincing and I want to know more! Please update, I'll be reading ^^Author's Response: Yup, there's going to be more chapters =D. Glad you liked it. Report Review
Ur right it is kinda confusing. But @ the same time well written and very suspence full. I cant wait 2 read more. =) =) =)Author's Response: Don't worry, it should make more sense after a few more updates. Thanks~ Report Review
This is well written. I don't like the very end "welcome to her life."
Some things can be improved but overall this is good. Author's Response: Thanks~ =D Report Review
This was pretty good, only I didn't understand two things- 1.) Why the battle was happening and 2.) Why the dark lord woult "Regret his desision". Either way, good story, if you contiue it, I'll be sure to read!Author's Response: That's to come later in the story ;) It wouldn't be very good if all the plot was revealed now, would it? Glad you enjoyed it~ Report Review
It's really good. Please post again quickly!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
this is my 100th review: I liked the starting of this story. It has great potential. I like how it starts in the middle of the action. Update soon!
~AlyAuthor's Response: 100 reviews... that's wonderful! Congrats, and great job.
Glad you liked the story, thanks for the review! Report Review
i love it ... and i didn't find it confusing (plot wise) ... just one thing .. when your talking about who is going to face their demise at the end of the second paragraph i think you meant to say that she wanted voldemort to, not harry ... :P
post the next chapter soon ... i'm dying to see what happens!
--Christa Author's Response: Alright, thanks for pointing that out. Glad you liked it~ Report Review
Whoa, that was an awesome first chapter. I can tell this story is going to be great! Keep up the great work :)Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
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