i like this ending over all better than JK's. though I would have snape fighting along side the order in the final battle personally..but that's just me. ;-) very niceAuthor's Response: Wow, I am honored! Thank you so much! :D
And ahem. I don't know about Snape in the final battle...which side do you think he would have fought on? :P Report Review
ooh I liked it! It was very well written, especially your description. The only thing I would say is that a few bits were kind of far-fetched but hey, its your story! (I don't know what a screen name is, but you requested my reviews off the forums) it's going in my favourites!Author's Response: Thank you! Could you tell me which parts you found a bit far-fetched? It is my job to make the story better. . . Thank you for reading! Report Review
it was greatAuthor's Response: Thank you! ^.^ Report Review
I found it! I voted for your story on the writer's duel, and I've been looking everywhere for it!
It is excellent. One of the most realistic final battle fics I have ever read. Keep writing!
VardaAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! ^.^ Report Review
Oooo! Great battle! The action was awesomely done!Author's Response: Thank you! ^.^ Report Review
Absolutely fabulous...after reading it again I remember exactly why I voted for you! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! ^.^ Report Review
This was really beautiful. And definatly not what I was expecting. It was a really exelent change from other "Final Battles".Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the compliment! ^.^ Report Review
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