7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Seamus Finnegan Fairies and Visions

15th May 2008:
um, your story is really weird, no offense or anything. you have alot of spelling mistakes and it seems like you make your character seem so amazing. try to be realistic. and your story doesnt flow very well either. use transition words! fix those things and your story will be alright.

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Review #2, by Seamus Finnegan New Beginnings

15th May 2008:
again, your story is boring. i know its just the first two chapters but the way your going this story isnt gonna be so well. please check your spelling and dont make rebecca seem so amazing. that will bring your story down...also add more detail. sorry for the harsh review.

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Review #3, by Seamus Finnegan Fairies and Visions

15th May 2008:
um, your story is really weird, no offense or anything. you have alot of spelling mistakes and it seems like you make your character seem so amazing. try to be realistic. and your story doesnt flow very well either. use transition words! fix those things and your story will be alright.

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Review #4, by Sundevil6 Fairies and Visions

3rd January 2008:
hey casey granger? You left me a review offering to do a banner for my story"through Ginny's and Harry's eyes. For information just email me at oblack_@hotmail.com

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Review #5, by Kitsunedisaster Fairies and Visions

10th December 2007:
Pshaw!!! Jeez chick. I didn't realise your grammer was that bad. I'll copy it to word and do the grammar changes and send it back to you. See ya tomorrow dear.

Rose

Author's Response: working on it, plus added a banner

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Review #6, by Alexis Theory Fairies and Visions

21st August 2007:
Yo, Casey! I'm working on the edit of this, but I must say, your grammer stinks. I also was working on a new sorting hat song, though I stink at poetry and all that stuff. anyway, keep writing!

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Review #7, by dew Fairies and Visions

3rd June 2007:
cool story!! It is interesting about the visions that Rebbecca has.
1000/10
~-~-Hannah-~-~

Author's Response: Ya, me and my friend are redoing the first chapter now and we are both working on the second too. The visions will be explained! Stay tunes.

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