I could make a banner for you but I don't know how to send it.And you need to tell me which actor or actress' picture you want my e mail address is 'peyveste93' and it's at yahoo. i can't give out my email address it won't allow me so that's why I wrote it like that.

Author's Response: oh okay, cause i tried hotmail & it didnt work.. but anyways sure it'll be under Banner Please For falling_angel55

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i like the plot.but u missed a lot of spacing...and ur grammar and spelling!!u need a be-ta!!!

but overall i loved it lol...

10/10

*M*

Author's Response: Thanks,
& I Havent Worked on it in a while, but I was on writing CHAPTER 3 & my little brother got mad at me & erased EVERYTHING! :@ i was so mad cause i was almost done too!

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it's good but a little to early to be kissing. but still good even thought it's your first story. maybe you could read some other story's to get ideas.
anyway like I said a good story Draco is a little out of character but he's still kind of acting like himself. Also there should have been a little more history on Ashley Lovegood, like where she was all this time and what school she went to before hogwarts. But it is your first story so maybe you didn't know.

It was good all in all so 9/10

Author's Response: thanks for the idea , the next chapters will hopefully be better , this story will only be 10 chapters , i`ve written it in a book. thanks for reviewing bye


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BORIING!

Author's Response: well sorry . but it was my first chapter

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You're very odd. This story is all right but a comment. When you're making it when someone starts talking, make it a new paragraph. Don't understand? Here's and example:
"." your done this part then you do this...

"." that's what you do with dialoge. Just telling you so it's better.

You should know who this is...

KELLY!! LOL.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip hopefully the next chapter is bettter .....
patricia

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