Nice~! Short and sweet. Report Review
Nice story! I liked all the twists, like when he decided he didn't want to die, but then he was too deep to save himself.. and then when it seems like everything is too late, Ginny comes to his rescue :)
I think you could even extend this story if you wanted to.
Good jobAuthor's Response: thank you!
extend? never thought about it.. hm.. haha
well maybe i will this summer.. cuz school just SUCKS right now. haha Report Review
too cute! great job! 100--100! =)Author's Response: Thank you!
I was so mad at Harry when he tried to kill himself. But I'm glad Ginny saved him. I liked it. =DAuthor's Response: ah thank you, thank you :D Report Review
cuteAuthor's Response: thanks :) Report Review
Wow. That was a lovely short story. It was incredibly sad and bittersweet and it definetly showed a different view of Harry killing Voldemort, the regret coming after and everything. It was a very well written story. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you for such a positive first review of my first fan fiction! Report Review
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