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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by birdie01 New Friends

6th July 2007:
You're an awesome writer.
Keep writing more.
You've got a great story developing.
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Review #2, by annandnattie New Friends

5th June 2007:
Good Keep writing!
-nattie

Author's Response: thx! i always appreciate reviews!

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Review #3, by annandnattie Sorted out, sorted apart

2nd June 2007:
wow...Jackie in Ravenclaw, this could present some problems. and a dursley at Hogwarts..
I found a minor glitch, in the first paragraph, you repeat your self. Also don't forget to add description!! I want you to paint me a picture, with words! It always helps the reader to understand was going on, and makes them want to read more! I read because I want to find out what happens! I enjoyed reading! always keep writing!
-nattie

Author's Response: thx SO MUCH! theres these little things, u know, that u dont notice when yur writing it. as soon as i read yur review, i went right back there and changed it. also, thx 4 the suggestion. i'll try 2 do that!

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Review #4, by annandnattie On the Train

2nd June 2007:
good! I like it! i would like to see some more detail, I'm having a hard time imagining whats going on. just add some more adjective's!
-nattie

Author's Response: thx! i'll try to add more description in the future!

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