OMG ITS BRILLIANT! ARE YOU DOING MORE? Report Review
PLEASE write a follow up! Report Review
I am really enjoying this story so please add the next chapter soon. Out of the storis i've read i like um i can't remember whats it's called the one where Lily and James can watch Harry in his room even though they're dead, that one's my fabourite then this none then Harry Black.
Please add more to them, please, please :)
Ta for a great read!Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews! I've finally gotten around to updating Harry Black. I'll be finishing this story and What Happened Next at some point too. Report Review
It sounds like he's given up not only his will to llive but he no longer cares about Voldemort or what happens anymore. I guess i'll find out.
I love you writing story and are enjoying most of your stories :) Report Review
i dont like where this story is going so im going to stop reading it now!Author's Response: At least you still liked it enugh to review. =] Report Review
...hedwigs dead? aw,she was the best owl ever! i love the story so far! 10/10! Report Review
LOVE the story.
Thx for updating
IAmClearlyInsaneAuthor's Response: Thanks! Report Review
This story is well written, but it is getting hard to follow. In understand that he is living in two different realities, and each chapter has him waking up in the other reality. But, it is hard to even have an idea as to where you are going with this story.Author's Response: Basically, it's going to end with Harry finding out which "reality" is real and the one he belongs in. Report Review
OH MY GOSH! This story is so cool! I love alternate universes! And how Sirius is a "matchmaker" and how he's still alive! Yay! Keep writing the story cuz I wanna know what happens!Author's Response: Thank you! I will! Report Review
okay... Harry is living two worlds?
Is he the only one or something? I am a bit confused by this... but it is pretty good. can't wait till next chapter! Oh, and will Harry tell the other world Sirius about what is happening, or tell the real world Dumbledor what is going on? I am pretty confused, but can't wait till next chapter! 9/10Author's Response: Basically, although it would probably be better described as two "realities", since he's technically on the same "world".
He's the only one who is bouncing back and forth between the realities, yes. Well, I'm not entirely sure yet...
I'll try to get it up sometime in the near future. Thanks! Report Review
I think I am starting to understand what is going on with the two "worlds." Who knows though, I could be completely mistaken.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!Author's Response: I'll try to explain it more in the next chapter too.
Thanks. Report Review
UPDATE SOON U TAKE TO LONGAuthor's Response: This story I plan to sometime in the next, possibly, two weeks. Report Review
UPDATE SOON U TAKE TO LONGAuthor's Response: It's difficult to update every story in a decent amount of time when I'm working on as many as I am. Report Review
hi i love it so hurry up or ill hex youAuthor's Response: Hi, thanks. I'll try to. Report Review
Double realities! Cool!Author's Response: Hannon le. Report Review
Interesting. My fic is updated! Check it out!Author's Response: Thank you.
Oki-dokes, will do! Report Review
He should of put something in his letters to get some one to comeAuthor's Response: Yeah, but I was planning something for that reality that, if someone did come, it wouldn't work out right. Report Review
well this story is getting, err, interesting
although you are making harry into a psycopath leading a double lifeAuthor's Response: I may be interpreting that differently than you mean it, but if not, then that will be amended before the story is over. Report Review
This is a good chapter, even if it is a bit "odd" like you say.
Maybe, instead of just having one POV in your chapter, you could have both? By POV, I mean, one from each 'universe', for lack of a better word?
This is a really good story so far.Author's Response: Thanks.
I would do that, except that this story is confusing enough (even to me) with the POVs changed just every chapter.
Thank you. Report Review
This was exciting! And I liked the part with Sirius and Tonks and the wrong button and the bed! That was funny! Update soon!
-jkrofanatic14Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to! Report Review
brilliant i love the whole story so far. you are are a good story writer.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Glad that Harry can be with SiriusAuthor's Response: Yeah... Report Review
It's not that odd. Is Harry switching between two possible realities - one where Sirius dies and one where he lives? That's my theory at the moment, and he's living double, sort of. Unless one is just a really detailed, long dream, since the reality switch seems to happen when he sleeps. Hmmm... *Shrugs shoulders* I'll find out eventually, I guess.
I can't believe I missed that!!! I combed the entire last half of the last chapter and completely missed it, somehow. It's a wonderful mistake, really. Hidden meaning.
Sirius... I really don't know what to say. I love Sirius, and I think that you've done a great job with him.
Anyway, keep writing!
Thank you.Author's Response: Basically, yes, he's living two realities.
Well, it's something you'd have to look for knowing you were looking for it. I almost missed it.
Thank you! I will. Report Review
Poor Harry.Author's Response: Yeah... Report Review
Sirius is alive?! How?Author's Response: How exactly will be explained in the last chapter. But, for the time being, the veil just wasn't deadly. Report Review
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