Oooh stranger danger!

Author's Response: I know :O hahah :D

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Too bad you hated it because I would have kept reading, I thought it was very good.

Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry! Haha I wrote this so long ago. I was about twelve and now I'm going to be going off to college haha.

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why did you stop this story i liked it ugh!

Author's Response: Oh I'm sorry! It's just that I wanted to move on to more mature things. This story looks like a child wrote it, and I did write it when I was very young. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though, N. :)

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I liked it very much.

Author's Response: Oh wow :) Thank you so much for reading :)

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i liked it :)
quite cute!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
You're so lovely :)

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its good, but a bit too much like the other dramiones i've read. go for a little more creativity, and a little less Draco+Hermione formula.

Author's Response: Thank you! That was great advice XD

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YOU HATE IT??? DOn't abandon it love, I was just getting really, interested!!!


I like! Why?

Author's Response: I'm so sorry that you liked it. I promise you, I'm writing another story right now!

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It's an interesting story. Ron is a nastie! I think there's too much of a muggle influence though.

Mind you, I haven't read the entire story yet. I'd like to see how this develops.

Author's Response: Yeah, I just re-read it. They also seem a bit out of character. Well, more than a bit, actually. More like a whole heaping of un-characteriness. =)

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hehehe.
I'm really starting to like this, I like the style of the story because it focuses more on the characters than the books.
I'm glad someone is doing that. =)

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou! Yeah, I didn't really include the books or any other things in this! teehee

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Pretty sweet.
I like this, especially the flashback.
But one thing I guess I would say, is somehow explain its a flashback without you know put headings for it?
But I really like it.
Good Job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice and comments!

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Aw...I really liked it. Well I guess I'll read your other story then. PS...I hate you!!! JKJK I don't mean that! Write soon :)

Author's Response: I shall! Thank you!

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Nice story.. I was kind of surprised it ended right there, but good story.

Author's Response: Yeah, I was too but I really couldn't continue with it. It was not my best writing, I will admit!

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Aww I really liked it! Even though it was really short, it had such a cute ending ... I loved the little food fight, LOL. Looking forward to reading your next story :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it! I kind of got the food fight thing from that movie Just My Luck where they're throwing bubbles at each other except in heare they were throwing food.. lol!

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I've enjoyed this story so far and can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: thank you veryveryveryvery much!

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hmmm... not to be mean but did you listen to what I said about adding more description? i think this story is definetly in need of some. but i like it, i really do! i do wonder though, have Gabrielle and Draco split up yet? it didn't seem very clear to me 7/10

-Mel

Author's Response: Oh, sorry, yah I didn't try so hard on this chapter really but don't worry, I promise to make it better, everyone! And, no, Gabriella and Draco have not formally broken up yet.

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Good I hope he breaks up with her! Great chapter, please update soon :)

Author's Response: I will!! Thank you!

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I love it!! Oh wow, Draco is stupid, haha. Great job on this ... going to the next chapter now :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you decided to read the next one, too!

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BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD BAD GRAMMAR/FIC/SPELLINGS. GET. A. BETA.

HEY, DON'T LOOK AT ME LIKE THAT! YOU SAID BE 'BRUTAL'

what do I know, anyway? I only read, like, the first two paragraphs... it put me off.

1/10




Author's Response: Okay, I'll try and fix all of my grammar and spellings. I am not looking at you weird, however. I did say be brutal and I would like to aplaud you for your brutal honsetness. if that even is a word.

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Ummm...I like it! My only problem is that I want Draco to know who Hermione really is soon. GREAT JOB!!!
♥Tabby♥

Author's Response: Thank you! I will do that in chapter 3!

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there deffenatly needs to be more... will there be more?

Author's Response: Yes, the second chapter is on it's way waiting for validation!

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I like it. But I think you may have went a little too fast with it. I did like how she and Draco ran into each other. I can't wait for the the next chapter, where things might happen between the two of them???

-Mel

Author's Response: Okay, I'll try to slow it down a little bit. Thankyou! and things should start to happen between them in Draco's penthouse.

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intersting.. will there be more?..

Author's Response: Yes, definetly! I might need to fix some of my spelling/grammar mistakes, but, I'm hoping to make this a 10-chapter story at least.

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