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Review #1, by xcountrygirlx Impulses

1st June 2011:
This like. is too good for words. And um I hid with my Droid and can't stop reading it. Y'all rock!

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Review #2, by Leesie Impulses

4th October 2010:
Aww! So cute! It would be great if you did a rewrite and expanded the story to show Harry realizing that Draco liked Hermione, Draco realizing his feelings, and how Hermione was also slowly falling for him.

~Yours Eternally~
Leesie

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Review #3, by Timechild Impulses

5th June 2009:
Cute story here. It could use a little more detail to slow down the pace. For example - When Draco sees Hermione asleep on the couch, what runs through his mind? What are his feelings? It would give this fic a little more punch to the story.

Nicely written all in all.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review

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Review #4, by RachelBee42 Impulses

14th July 2007:
Well, for starters I enjoyed the story. I really, really love Hermione and Draco together! The main problem with this story is that there was no conflict. You said Draco was in love with Hermione, but you didn't explain how he got to that point. It would take a big change in Draco to abandon his prejudices against muggle-borns and I think it could've added a lot to your story. So there really was no problem in the story, which all stories need. However, your writing style really was quite good! I think if you just added some more conflict it would be a really good story!

Author's Response: Thanks fo r the suggestion I might jsut do that.

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Review #5, by reader Impulses

7th July 2007:
aww i loved it, very nice!

Author's Response: Thanks

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Review #6, by liandhate Impulses

6th July 2007:
it was ok, but you could have filled us in a bit more. good for a first dramione.
8/10
li


Author's Response: thanks


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Review #7, by harrypottergirl Impulses

17th June 2007:
it was ok


Author's Response: thanks for the reveiw

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Review #8, by drkmystic Impulses

3rd June 2007:
it was quite good actually for a short story you should make it into a a real story .Just put those parts in order.

Author's Response: I was thinking about that but wasn't sure what to do

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