Wow, what a way to finish, I really loved the way that you finished off. As for any idea’s that I can give you, I’m not coming up with anything. I’m flat out trying to get some ideas for my own stories.

But If I ever do come up with something, I promise that I will let you know.

How their great their having a baby! Babies are so cute!! I have this friend who’s older sister just had a baby, he keeps complaining that it keeps him up all night, and he’s suffering because of lack of sleep, but truly, come on it’s a baby of course it’s going to cry for cryin’ out loud!

But he is a great guy and will make a great father one day. Now enough about me.

Hope you’re doing well, with another sequel and life in general. This will likely be my last review for a little while, because you gotta get that other story up and I’ve got to some how get a life.

But loved all of it, and can’t wait to hear well read the about their future kiddies.

Until next time
Your greatest fan
Dark Crys


Author's Response: I just wanted to use this oppurtunity to thank you so much for reviewing every chapter. it meant so much, and i hoped that it's even improved my writing.

i will try and get the next one up as soon as i can, and i hope that you enjoy it. we're working real hard on it.

until then, thank you.

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What is going on with Kate, that was really weird, maybe I missed something. Oh well. Anyways apart from that another job well done, can’t wait to read more.

Until next time.
Dark Crys


Author's Response: yeah, don't ask me about Kate. lol
that's not my department.

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Another great chapter, I’m so sorry but my time slot for reading is up, so I’ll try and get back to you as soon as I possibly can.

But I did really love the chapter, and can’t wait to read the next
Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: thank you for being so loyal, even when your this crazed! it means alot thank you.

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Another wonderful chapter, I can’t believe I’m actually finding time to read this; I must be super woman or something. I have so much on, I’m only just managing to juggle it all, and I’m no good at juggling.

There I go again talking about me; okay now let’s talk about you!

Again spelling and grammar is something that can be improved easily, but your still haven’t a few problems with. You have a great talent and it shows with the way you write and the story line let alone the little plots you put into the story.

Again loved it, jeez I’ve got fat fingers today. I have to keep back spacing just to spell a word right.

But can’t wait to read more, almost done now!
Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: thank you so much.

i've gone back and started to re-edit it and i will eventually get to the end. lol

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Don’t worry I haven’t forgotten you. I’ve just been a little swamped on this end. I haven’t got any writing done let alone any reading. But enough about me.

Another chapter well done. Tensions seem to be rising a just a little bit. What I loved most about this Chapter is the whole scene with Jason, Cat’s ex who died. I found it just so sweet that in a way her memory of him in a way came back to life to tell her it’s time to move on and live your life, and not to fear that you shouldn’t be afraid to love someone, just because you believe you may loose them.

Sorry a romantic, I must get it from my father, because that’s so not my Mum. But anyway, loved it to bits. Oh and by the way, I’m sorry if you those friends of mine haven’t really been reviewing, and I’m not going to make excuses for them it’s just that their as swamped as I am at the moment.

Anyways can’t wait to read more
Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: that's all right. i understand busy. we're crazed here too...so don't sweat it.

thank you, i really loved this scene too. it was actully really personal and important to me...(not that i saw the ghost of ex-since he wasn't dead) but something similar happened,so that was really important to me.



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Unfortunatly I have a life, and was unable to review sooner.

Loved it, yet again you show even more talent.

have to hurry, someone calling

until next time
Dark Crys

Author's Response: that's quite all right, i understand. just don't forget about me! lol jk

thank you, yet again.

can't wait till your finished.

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If there is anything I have ever been it's hung over. okay so it was only once after I dumped my boyfriend for the second time. Hey I had a messed up time about a year and a half ago. I try to avoid those kinds of drinks now.

anyways enough about me. another great story and my question is if you've ever been drunk because you did a pretty good job of it.

can't wait for the next chapter
until next time
Dark Crys

Author's Response: eh i understand that...and though i've never gone to that limit (whilst i was in that situation) i know people that have, so i'm glad you thought i 'tuned' into it.

thank you.

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meeting the parents has never been easy. but that one went by relitivily painless, don't you think. i love that you are able to come up with some real original idea's. in some places it makes me look like an amiture (don't think I spelt that right at all. oh well, you know what I mean).

another great chapter, this would have to be one of my favourites. keep up the great work and the original idea's sometimes they even give me an idea or two. don't worry i'm not stealing your writing, their different but also similar in a very small way.

anyways, good work and can't wait to read the next chapter.
until next time
Dark Crys

Author's Response: well as always, thank you so much for telling me your opionion. i agree...it was a bit easy but it gets a bit worse later.

im glad if i can give you some ideas..feel free to do what you want...as long as im credited! (loljk)

i hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

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okay, guess what, i have my editor onto your story as I'm writing this so, your going to get in more reviews as i write this as well.

Anyways good chapter and keep up the good work.
until next time
Dark Crys

Author's Response: oh, thank you so much!
thats amazing!

thank you again.

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Another lovely chapter, keep up the great work

soz again it's short.
until next time
Dark Crys

Author's Response: again, i don't mind if it's short. lol

thank you anyway.

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What’s going to happen next??? Hm . . . . . maybe I should read the next chapter. Yeah that sounds like a good idea. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: reading more is always helpful in finding out what happens next! lol

thank you for another wonderful review!

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Another great chapter can’t wait for the next.

another shorty but as I said in my last review I'm running out of things to say
until next time
Dark Crys

Author's Response: i am also running out of things to say...aw well it is almost over.

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I’m running out of things to say in each of the reviews I give, because I’m getting sick of repeating myself.
So good work, can’t wait for the nexr chapter
Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: well i can understand that. lol i'm just thrilled that you are enjoying it.

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"feel guilty or die" that’s a good one. Which only a mother can give. Keep it up your doing great.

again sorry it's so short
until next time
Dark Crys

Author's Response: i as well love that.
thank you as always.

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Love it keep it up!

soz it's not that long
until next time
dark crys

Author's Response: it's all right if it's not long...lol

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That sounds like one hell of a gym! I wish I had one. Soz fitness freak here, get it from my dad. Anyways, love the imagination and the ideas put into the chappie and the whole three month thing sounds pretty cool, but it could also be real painful.

Gonna keep it short.
Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: i love the gym as well. it just came into my head as i was writing. i didn't even mean for that to come out. lol

i as well love the three month thing...the only thing now to watch out for, is to see if they can both stand out for that.

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Every mother and daughter has to have something in common, no matter what. I love it how you made it that Kate stays on with her mum for a while, it kind of reached home, well except for the part about not having all that in common.

You have a talent and you make it so that, in a way the readers that are reading your story can actually understand, and relate to what you are writing.

Keep it up and look forward to reading the next chappie.
Well until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: thank you very much. i try to put diffrent types of characters in so that the reader can relate to at least one person or something in each character.

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What is it with guy’s and hating shopping? Then again that’s why I go shopping with my gay friend, he has great taste. It also helps seeing as I hate shopping that he’s quick. I kind of feel sorry for him because no one dares to go shopping with him.

Anyways, back to your story. Very well done!! ;)*Clapping* now something has to happen to Kate and Jake while their shopping because that would kind of be the iceing on the top if it did, but if it doesn’t then I’ll live and you probably came up with a much better idea than I could put in that situation. Probably because you know the characters by heart, in a way they are you. Where I only know what you write down not what you keep hidden. Even if I am good at weeding these things out, it’s doesn’t mean that I get it every time.

Anyways, can’t wait to keep reading and will get back to you as soon as I’ve finished the next chappie.
Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: well i have to say that i have very little control over what happens with them, but i hope that the next scenes are entertaining enough that you are not to dissapointed with the fact that this was sort of brushed off.

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Cat is the kind of person who sometimes, overreacts, and maybe even have a major misunderstanding. But is very much a forgiving person, that pretty much sums her up doesn’t it?

That’s a great feeling isn’t it? When you have a sibling that would protect you no matter what, whether it comes to life and death situation or something simple and overrated like boyfriends and girlfriends, but in this case fiancées.

You are good at the description of the pain and what they are thinking, almost as if you were thinking the very thing that they are or were which ever way you want to look at it. But it’s definitely a talent that would be worth testing. I’d love to read something that you wrote outside of HP and all that. Your own story line everything. Maybe one day I’ll get a read huh?

That’s just me being hopeful, but anyways. Yet another great chapter, keep up the good work and I’ll try to keep coming up with compliments. I’m starting to run out of words to write, I think I’ve written the same too many times each as well.

Oh well. Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: yes, you pretty much summed her up. part of the forgiving side is because she's young and loves him so much...even though he makes her crazy.

thank you for complimenting my pain description. i was very worried about that...i'm not sure why...but i thought that it was perhaps to dramatic. when i wrote it however, i was pulling of similar feelings that i had gone through...so at the time it was sort of like therapy for me.

in the case of reading something i wrote outside of harry potter, that is entirly possible. if you would like, i have written two books. they are completed in my notebooks but not quite on the computer.

the website is www.blueyes297.piczo.com

there should also be a link for my other story called Harvest Ridge on the friends list. i can't remember at the moment what the url is...

i would be very honored if you would read them and there is of course space for you to leave more of your beautiful, encouraging comments.

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What a dick-head!!! Who the hell does he think he is! Not even telling his parents or his friends or anyone! After he said that he had!!! What a . . . . .

Oh, sorry, needed the rant. But Eric is a jerk for what he did to Cat. I don’t blame her for running off, but personally I wouldn’t break the engagement off until I’d cooled off and had thoughts that semi rational. But I would more than likely break something in the process of cooling off. Hehe. Sorry not funny.

You sure do know how to write a story, you’re doing sooo well. Keep it up, your doing great, and don’t let anybody tell you otherwise.

Until next time
Dark Crys


Author's Response: *hand on chest* thank you sooo much...and i agree...it was a bit drastic...but how about if you look at it this way...

Cat was trusting him enought to almost like...make love with him right...not to mention she's alone and confused and without her sister. she's entirely dependent on Eric right now, and he betrayed her.

does that help it make more sense?

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Those maids are just too sneaky. Hehehe. Yet again you seem to amaze me, you get better and better with each page. You have the old habit of your first and third person still hanging around, but it can be ignored when you look at the story line. Your doing a great job! Keep up the good work, and you’ll have one hell of a story on your hands.

Now I’m just going to have to wait until one of friends tell me whether they agree or not. One of them is the person who encouraged me to write in the first place, plus she’s not too bad of a writer herself when she gets the time to actually sit at her computer and write something. She just seems to have too many distractions at the moment. I’ll see if I can get her to have a read.

Sorry I seem to be babbling on as usual. But I really to love the story and It’s hard to nit pick when I’ve already pointed out your little problems at least a dozen times. Oh, well. You’ll just have to give me something in the next few chapters to come for me to nit pick. Talking of next chapters, I’m going to have to love you and leave you so that I can read the next chappie and get back to you.

Until next time
Still a fan
Dark Crys


Author's Response: i really don't mind your babbiling. I have to restrain myself from putting a/n at the bottom of every chapter. i fear that if i did i would never shut up. lol

in a way, i hope i don't give you anything really terrible to pick about...but maybe there will be something....lol

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Do you know what I love most about your characters, their just so . . . I don’t know, they just don’t let anything pressure them. They stick by their morals, its probably the best thing any person can have, being able to say no, but still I guess you could say joke about it. I’m sure if I worded that quite right but it’ll do. It’ll have to unless I come up with something real fast.

. . . . . . Nope . . . . . . Nothing. Maybe next time, I’ll be able to extend my vocab a little.

I don’t have a twin, I have a younger brother, that’s it. So I have no idea what it would be like to be away from someone your so close to. I guess it would explain why I proffer to be alone, and hate crowds, too many people!!!

Anyways, another great chapter, I swear your getting better with each chapter.
Until next time
Still yet again your most devoted reviewer
Dark Crys


Author's Response: wow. your an amazing reviewer (as well as a writer!)

the characters are so much like us that we just write how we would react. sometimes it's acting, but for the moral majority it is us.

i don't have a twin either...in fact i am an only child but i know what it's like to be away from my best friend (who is almost like my sister anyway) so we kinda try to draw on that.

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Sounds like it’s going to be an interesting holiday. Even if the twins are apart. They be together after a bit and probably talk none stop until they either can’t breath or Jake and Eric end up carrying them away over their shoulders. Hehehehe sorry couldn’t help myself.

It was good to learn more about the boy’s, you seem to avoid explaining them and their pasts a little pit. But you don’t really pick up on it for the fact that you have them with the girls all the time. I’m just wandering if you put in a few scenes down the track of just Jake and Eric talking, about themselves the girls and their family. Then we would learn a whole load of stuff in a really short amount of time/reading which every way you want to look at it. Who knows maybe I’ll find out in the next couple of chapters when Cat and Eric are at his place.

The intern thing kind of came out of nowhere, but it could be an idea to go with, I can’t wait to see what you do with it, because personally I have no stinking idea.

That’s all I’ve got to say, not my longest and definitely not my shorted.
Until next time
Still your most devoted reviewer
Dark Crys


Author's Response: well there isn't really anything between the boys...there is one scene coming up i belive...and now that you have said that...i want to do it! lol

too late this time, but perhaps next time.
maybe even in the sequel...

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Well that back fired big time didn’t it. But in a way it’s a good thing that the boy’s can sing then it wouldn’t be too embarrassing for anybody. Well done, another chapter well done. You keep getting better and better as the chapters go on, maybe your just getting the hag of it who knows but each chapter is better than the first.

Can’t wait to read more, I truly can’t!
Until next time
Your most devoted reviewer
Dark Crys


Author's Response: you really are my most devoted reviewer. you can't wait to read the chapters and i can't wait to read your reviews. lol

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Gotta love a lil revenge, even for the little things. Yet again another chapter done wonderfully. You still have your little problems with spelling and first and third person, but that’s only little things. Otherwise it’s all very well done.

Can’t wait to read more, always have and probably always will. I promised I’d take a look, and I always keep my promises.

I was really put out when I saw that nearly no one has reviewed this story, maybe I should get some hpfriends onto it. I have half a dozen who read this stuff then pass it on to other readers. What I did to get more reviews was put in a little something in my user summary. You should try it and see if you can get more reviews. I don’t care if their good or bad or even short saying good job. It means you’ve been a acknowledged. Give it a go and see what happens. Your getting the readers just not the reviews.

Good luck and I can’t wait to read more.
Your most devoted reviewer
Dark Crys


Author's Response: i would totally be sooo thankfull if you pass this story on. there have been a few reviews, but yours by far are always the best.

i know what you mean by it's just nice to be noticed. well i hope that now that it's completed and there are alot of hits it will get better.

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