i always wondered what really made sirius want to escape besides just not wanting to be in there anymore. i really liked this one =] Report Review
That was fantastic! Really clever! I have one little bit of constructive criticism... James and Lily were hiding for a whole year before Voldermort found them. He heard the prophecy just before Harry was born and killed his parents when he was one.
Apart from that it was excellent!Author's Response: thanks for the lovely review. i forgot about that little thing, i'll hopefully fix that someday. :D Report Review
I do like this story, and I think it is very well written and just interesting.
But I hope you would think about writing: HOW the minster came and HOW exactly he run away from Azkaban.Author's Response: umm thanks. well i didn;t really want to focus on the how. it was the why that i was focusing on in this fic, which is why i wrote it the way i did. Report Review
a very wicked story:)Author's Response: thanks! glad you loved it! Report Review
was fantastic, kept me reading the whole way :) next you should write why Pettigrew betrayed them. i'll have an account soon, so keep me posted! maybe i'll write that story :)Author's Response: thanks, glad u enjoyed it. thats a mad idea...see what i can do! :D i'll keep u posted...but u should have a read of my other stories too!:D since they're first priority atm! Report Review
I love how you kept the characters canon. Good job.Author's Response: thanks that was the aim so i'm glad i got it right! :D Report Review
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