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Review #1, by Quidditchandhorses Chapter 1

23rd April 2009:
Wow, I don't know why you don't have any reviews right now. Your story is really good! I think the pain description at the beginning is really accurate, and you can totally see it all unfold as you read. The series of events goes by at a good place, and really, I just have one small correction. In Hermione's letter, it should be you-KNOW-where, instead of you-NO-where. Just a simple little thing, no big deal. Wow, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Nice work!

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