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Review #1, by wazlibsgrl

12th March 2008:

I actually thought that was really good. I would keep it at this though and not write the second chapter. The way you ended it was perfect.

9/10

**wazlibsgrl*

Author's Response: thank you!

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Review #2, by Amortentia10

Mouth Shut

7th December 2007:

it was interesting to see all this from a different angle... obviously, after reading book 7, it couldn't have happened... i like dit, it was different... good job on the creativity, and u have good writing abilities, too!

Author's Response: thanks heaps!! :)

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Review #3, by Onyx Scorpio

Mouth Shut

18th September 2007:

That was interesting... I hope to see another chapter! :)

Author's Response: don't know if i'm going to write one...think i should?

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Review #4, by twinkies

Mouth Shut

15th August 2007:

I don't know, I didn't really like it but it was ok. I liked the beginning more, but the ending was almost exactly like the book so it wasn't ariginal.

Author's Response: well, if i wrote another chapter the neding would be different, should i write one?

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Review #5, by HauntedLyra22

Mouth Shut

26th July 2007:

its very...well i dont know...interesting, it would be plausible if i hadnt read the 7 book before reading this so yeah but i see a few things wrong but other than that i really quite liked it!!
-Lyra

Author's Response: thanks! did you read the theory? yeah so much work put into it and it didn't come out, but i rreally liked the idea so i just thought i'd use it. LOVED DH!

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