awww they are all so happy this was a nice chapter (sniffles* Report Review
oh gosh oliver is blind :( awww that was sad how much pain can ppl bare man this was an excellent chapter i really liked how real this story has been so far everyone feels so much and emotions wonderfully written! Report Review
hmmm interesting so lee wanted to marry her i cant wait till oliver finds her Report Review
awww man oliver didnt discover her and lee didnt figure it out :( i hope he finds her soon Report Review
i wonder what lee has to announce and oo he has sisters that i didnt know lol Report Review
o leee jordan!!! nice chapter i wonder what happend with oliver nd that girl then Report Review
so he was married to some other girl and he says he isnt and the others say he is hmm interesting nice chapter Report Review
oliver seems excited about the wedding that was interesting and i wonder what mrs brown means by that Report Review
hmmm interesting so he kissed her but does that mean he is ditching cho? Report Review
lol Mr woood so hot i cant believe he is marrying cho the ugly foo! Report Review
o interesting chapter her aunt is a right git! Report Review
hmmm, that was an interesting chapter poor allison shes such a tortured soul! Report Review
hmmm interesting nice chapter i wonder whats going to happen now Report Review
awww poor rosemary :( i realy hate cortez! Report Review
someone dropped a piano interesting very interesting nice chapter Report Review
oh snap ahahah that was definitly quiet an awesome meeting nice chapter Report Review
wow that family is a bunch of evil gits i like mrs smithins hehehe and i like rosa i think her name is? Report Review
i honestly don't like cortez he seems like a git! Report Review
oh now i get it that was definiatly an interesting chapter poor girl! ditched like that :( Report Review
oh gosh who is that poor child is that hermione? thats so terrible! Report Review
I really loved your story, from beginning to end!! I hope you keep writing, because you are exceptionally good at it!! =)Author's Response: Awww, thanks soo much! Right now, I'm kind of going through the writer's block/I don't want to write stage, and it really sucks. But thanks for your encouragement! And for reading my story! ^_^ Report Review
Great story!! I really like it!! I noticed a few things, though... Allie seems to be getting younger. At the beginning of the story, she was 22, then, a few chapters ago, she was 20, and in this chapter, it says she's 19. Also, you started calling Lee 'Oliver' in the middle of this chapter when he's making his announcment. Anyway, those were just a few little things I picked up. I like the story so much that the little things are the only things that need fixing!! Great job!Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah... she was supposed to be 18 during the prologue, and then the time difference between the prologue and the beginning was supposed to be 2 years. Inconsistency, I seem to do quite often... lol. And sorry about the Lee/Oliver thing... I was in the Oliver mindset when I wrote it, and so instead of putting 'Lee', I put 'Oliver'. Report Review
Good story!! I already like it!Author's Response: Thanks soo much! ^_^ Report Review
aw! *is so sad the story is over* *cries eyes out* I'm happy Ollie got his sight back, though. You gonna write a sequel? I'd love to read if you get any ideas. I'd say "update soon!" but I CAN'T! *sobs*Author's Response: Aw. Thanks! I'm sad you're sad, and a little sad for the reason you're sad as well. A lot of sadness, lol. Anyway, I really want to write a sequel, but sequels haven't come out so well for me, and besides, I have no plotline to come off of. However, if that day comes, that day when I'm sleeping in the middle of the night and inspiration hits me like a bolt of lightning - probably right before a test, lol - I'll write it down and post it as soon as possible, but, more than likely, I won't be able to write it. *sighs* Report Review
Aw, I wish it hadn't ended yet ;) Now that you mention The Game Of Love, that story is where I found yours in the first place, haha. By the way, I'm so happy that Oliver got his eyesight back! And Olivia is fourteen...she's definitely not young anymore. I'm glad for Samantha, too. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story. Allison Perks, or, rather, Wood now, has had captured my heart since the first chapter, and I'm most relieved that she has a Happily Ever After after all :]Author's Response: Me, too, me too! lol. Aw, thanks! Thanks for reading the story. The sad thing is, I've had moments where I didn't know what to write and others where I couldn't stop writing. lol. Thanks! I really appreciate your reviews! ^_^ Report Review
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