Awe, this story is adorable! You'd better continue it! I'm excited to see how their date goes!

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dun, dun, dun!!!
you appear to enjoy cliff hangers!!!
LOVE the story!!!
AMAZING!!!
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ooh, an elusive herbalist??? fair enough!!!
LOVE it!!!
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LOVE the story!!!
AMAZING!!!
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dun, dun, dun!!!
LOVE the story!!!
AMAZING!!!
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that was good!!!
LOVE the AMAZING story!!!
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this is AMAZING!!!
LOVE it!!!
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ooh, this is really great!!!
LOVE it!!!
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ps could you check out my ff 'three little words'? thanks!

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funny!!!
LOVE it!!!
really great idea!!!
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really great!!!
LOVE the story!!!
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ooh, good start!!!
LOVE the story!!!
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hehehe that was adorable. I can see he's already falling for her! That's perfect! I can't wait for the fair, it's going to be awesome! please update soon and may good writings continue to you. ~Moni Jane

Author's Response: thank you! James/ evans makes such a good pair! thanks for the awesome review!

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hehehe I loved the refusal. It was cute. ^^ And I'm excited about the fair. I forsee only good coming out of it so yay!

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hehehe the dream was perfect! Poor James, so clueless!

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Wow! this was a great chapter! full of suspense! I want to know who the man in armour is. :P and Sirius! I feel so bad that he seems so out of the loop stuck doing civil duties and whatnot. And the Slytherin attacking was a brilliant plot move. I applaud thee! hehe

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THe first paragraph was hilarious. wonderful writing style! I'm so glad I found this story again! I remember how much I loved reading the previous chapters and looked forward to more updates and now there are more so yay!

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So is the dress black or green because earlier you said green, and now it's black.

Author's Response: sorry.. its green.. what a goof up!

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Umm, yeah just so you kow it's spelled squire. Not aquare as in the shape. Other wise it's a good story so far.

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I loved James' dreamy smile, I could picture it so vividly.
I love the 'its beautiful' 'you're beautiful' part that was so adorable!
I love the part about her nails; only James would say that outloud, and this line: "Seconds transformed to minutes, and minutes seemed to while away into hours as James waited" was just beautiful. I loved it. I loved the whole thing! wonderful job!

Author's Response: thank you! you just made my day!
i was really apprehensive about this chapter, the hardcore romanticism freaked me out. but im glad you like it!
Yes, typical James, right? Hes just so adorable!
Best
~kiki

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aw, James is so sweet. the scene between them two was really good and sweet. I liked the dialogue and interaction between them. Great job!

Author's Response: james is just too sweet! Thanks for reading!
best
~kiki

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ok, two questions: isnt marauder a girl? and what exactly was James doing? other wise, great chapter. is this a hint to Evans identity? are we going to feel silly when she is revealed?

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Poor Cynthia! The whole thing was so dramatic. so who was the male prisoner? couldn't you possibly tell me?
Anyways, great chapter, I love your unique story. great chapter ending.

Author's Response: The identity of the male prisoner will be revealed soon, so hold your hippogriffs!
thaks and best
~kiki

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Hmm, the elusive herbalist? interesting. very good job, I loved James' thoughts that drove him to find a way out, his protectiveness of Evans, Evans mumblings, and of course, the elusive herbalist.

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Whoo! what a cliffhanger! (that is three in a row now isnt it?)
Great job, I love the description, and how you made bella queen of slytherin. Poor Cynthia.
I love the fast pace!

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ah! more cliffhanger! So good, I love how you split the chapters! it makes it so much more interesting to read, and it keeps the reader reading!
poor James!

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