Chell from the forums doing exactly as I promise. This was a brilliant epilogue except for the fact that HArry died. I cried. As for HArry and Ginny's son, whats his name? and who who the new dark lord disguised as? So many questions. Well, it was very well written and I liked it. Great job ;)Author's Response: You cried? Thanks! I don't mean to sound rude, or anything, but I take that as it means you were moved by my writing, or at least the thought of what happened. And I was thinking about writing a story about the boy, where everything would be explained. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Tihs was a very nice, detailed story. I caught a few spelling errors though, mainly words where you left off a letter or added one by mistake. I loved the ending, and would definitely read his story if you decided to write one.Author's Response: Thanks. I'll be sure to go over it and fix them! And I was thinking more about his story. Maybe I will write one, after I get more of my other stories finished. Glad to know people are willing to read it! Report Review
I like the ending. Who was the new Dark Lord? Well done!Author's Response: Thanks! You want to know who the Dark Lord wass, huh? Well, another review got me thinking about writing about this poor baby boy's life, so maybe, just maybe, you'll be seeing a story about him soon, where you'll find out about the Dark Lord and everything else! Report Review
Harry died? That's sad... Good fic! I like your ending.Author's Response: Yes. It is sad. And thanks! I like my ending too. It brings everything full circle... Report Review
Interesting epilogue. Neat idea of the history repeating itself process. One thing that kind of confused me is you say Malfoy and Pettigrew are buried between Voldemort and Harry, but then you say Harry is still alive a few paragraphs later. Pretty good story thoughAuthor's Response: Oh, whoops! Thanks for telling me, I'll go fix that now. Thank you, I'm really glad you like it! Report Review
That's all I can think of to say right now. hehe. I never even IMAGINED of the whole 'Time Repeating Itself' Thing, but the last bit of your story sent chills down my spine. Amazing. I loved hearing what happened to everyone involved, it closes everything off and stuff...but of course now I want to know what happened to Harry's Son! lol.
Amazing, honestly. I can tell Fred and George are probably your favourite characters. lol.
Very good work. Very.Author's Response: Thank you! Your review made my day! You want to know what happens to Harry's son, huh? Hmm... maybe there's a story for that in sight then...
And no, Fred and George aren't my favorite characters. I'm quite fond of Remus and Cedric, although the twins are pretty awesome, aren't they?
Thank you again. Report Review
Interesting! I enjoyed reading your epilogue :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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