i loved this story, it is very interesting and i would LOVE if you made another chapter.
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amazing!keeep writing,im so into it right now,i wanted her to punch zabini=Pplease its SO good! Report Review
oh God! Don't do this to me please please please finish this story!!!This is so good and can't wait to see what happens next. Report Review
ow I LIKE PLEASE WORK ON IT PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE Report Review
i like it a lot!!
please update! Report Review
Tha's sooo cute. update are reqiured Report Review
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Seriously, no offence, but this is not the best fanfiction I've read in ages. Since I don't believe in mindless criticism, I'll give you a couple of tips:
1. I believe this is in England? If so, please use the English currency of Pounds. We use 'Cupboard', not 'Closet'. Also, we do *not* have bagel shops. We are not Little America.
2. The Phantom of the Opera has been running in London's West End since 1986 (in 'Her Majesty's Theatre' if you want to know) and so the show would not be coming there.
3. Why must you change Hermione like this? Many people really prefer her how J.K. Rowling writes her- as a lovable, bossy bookworm, almost certainly with no regard to fashion.
Now, I'm not saying that you should give up writing, rather that instead of changing Hermione, maybe you should create your own character. I am not a heartless bitch who goes around giving nasty reviews to other people's stories. I have simply given you advice. Take it or leave it. Report Review
update soon! Report Review
please update soon! i love it already. got any updating plans anytime soon. lol. yh this is great so please update Report Review
Awww now you cant just leave us here you have to keep writing. And soon I might add or there might be a riot, and that just wouldn't be good now would it. Report Review
wow I love it its totally cute and suprisingly not totally cliche keep it up cuz Im luvin it!! wow i just sounded like a mcdonalds commercial... Report Review
ooohhh...hermione blaise...i likeee.update soon!!! Report Review
A very interesting beginning. :] I'm glad that for once I found a story that doesn't start the usual way. This is something different, so kuddos to you! :]
Looking forward to reading more!
-- J. Author's Response: omg thanks so much this is my 1st story and ill tell you it has LOTS of twists! Report Review
oh..cant wait 4 the makeover...ur summary is a little confusing but the plot sounds good so far...update soon!!! Report Review
great story line!! yay phantom!!! hurry with next chapter plzzz!Author's Response: yea another phantom fan! im a complete drama geek so this is what i live 4! Report Review
Not a bad start...
VERY interesting plot.
It's also very interesting that you put it into a 1st person perspective, because the stories are usually 3rd person.
I was a little confused about the job part, was there a time lapse from when she was there last?
It was well written, except I think there were some spelling errors like 'strait' but besides that...
It's very entertaining, putting it in my faves. :]
[Is this your first review for this story? Then yay, if someone beat me, oh well =P] Report Review
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