14 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lady Inferno Remuses' present

3rd March 2007:
This story caught my attention and I just had to read it. Is there more to the story or a sequal?

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Review #2, by anakfenty Remuses' present

25th May 2006:
I LOVE IT!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? PLEASE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP!!!!!

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Review #3, by Ambur Black The Marauders

3rd May 2006:
lil1318, can I finish your story for you. I love that idea. PLease answer me soon by e-mailing me to kupcaking@comcast.net

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Review #4, by k1ttycat Remuses' present

1st January 2006:
im a little confussed, but its a gd idea!

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Review #5, by kerricarri Two world's meet

13th October 2005:
How intriguing! Please do continue, because this is such an interest twist on the HP books. It makes perfect sense for Harry to be the one to write them, but wow...sending all this back into the past? Along with himself? You portray him quite brilliantly in this fic, and not too OOC either! Although I must say, though the way you write is easy to follow, try to get out of the habit of writing script dialogue, because if you don't, your whole story is basically script - except for Chp. 3 I think, where you actually described the situation and whatnot that Harry was in. You know what I mean? However, despite the chapters being pretty much incomplete, I'm staying because the plot itself is very intriguing. Break out of this script dialogue, and you'll reel readers in better.

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Review #6, by Abhorsen The Marauders

26th September 2005:
Most interesting...

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Review #7, by Lady Inferno Remuses' present

3rd March 2005:
I love this story it is so imaginative. Please post the other chapters soon

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Review #8, by Zeva Lobo Remuses' present

16th November 2004:
Utterly spiffy! update

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Review #9, by lilyum Remuses' present

25th May 2004:
great story! update soon

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Review #10, by jess1z1 The Marauders

28th March 2004:
hey, continue please. it's really interesting and remus really is like an uncle to harry, isn't he? that's nice ^_^

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Review #11, by Halo The Marauders

23rd March 2004:
cool, his uncle! definately better than Vernon, eh! update soon.

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Review #12, by jessica The Marauders

2nd March 2004:
DUN DUN DUUUN!! ooh, let's see what that's all about!

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Review #13, by Lupinzgurl Harry's Letters

2nd March 2004:
Hi - You have started an interesting story line. I am interested to see what happens.

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Review #14, by fhgfds The Marauders

2nd March 2004:
thats hilarious

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