Same person who just reviewed on "Falling Ill" like, 20 seconds ago, and I also love this one! Great job!

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I liked the way look inside Neville's head. It was light and clever and insightful, all at once. His thought processes, as they developed and as you set them out, were very much in character.

Luna, likewise, as seen through his eyes, was very "Luna."

I did not think of robes (specifically, in the context of Harry's fitting Neville) as being, essentially, one size fits all; but -- why not?

I thought this was a great little story. The punnish title was cut, as well.

Author's Response: Thank you, Elizabeth! It means a lot coming from you. I really enjoyed writing from Neville's point of view, so this was a lot of fun for me. : )

Thanks again!

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Hey!

this story's really cool & sweet, you've really captured Neville's character!

I love it!

Abs xoxox

Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much!

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Aaaww, that was so cute! *^^* Go Neville!

Author's Response: Go Neville, indeed! Thank you for reviewing!

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its really cute. i love how he goes off on rants and

next to -i hope luna likes ducks-
this was my favorite line -I sat up and felt my nose gingerly. It felt like it was broken. Damn.- idk why but i found this extremely funny

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :)

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This is so sweet! And Neville was such a believable character. I'm so glad you wrote companions. I'm going to read them as soon as I get the chance.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I try so hard to make the characters believable, so I'm happy you thought he was! I hope you check the others out. : ) Thanks for reviewing!

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I LOVE IT! OMG THATS SO CUTE

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so! Thank you so much for reviewing!

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aw, thats so unbelievably cute and funny :) neville/luna aw

Author's Response: Thanks! I love Neville/Luna, too. They're so sweet.

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Oh, just lovely! You really know how to write as Neville! Luna's really hard... I don't know how JK Rowling comes up with Gurdyroots or whatever.

Anyway, it was spectacular. No surprise, though. I've read almost all of your work! I'm a huge fan!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! It's so weird to think I have a *gasp* fan. ; ) I really appreciate that you continue to read my work!

I have no clue have JK became so incredibly awesome. I'm so glad you think I write one of her characters well!

Thank you so much for the nice review!

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oh how cute! I loved it!

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*squees* That was so cute!!

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I really love your style of writing. Quick, witty, fun. Keeps me wanting more.

Author's Response: Quick, witty, AND fun? You know how to flatter a girl. ; ) Seriously, thank you so much! That's so nice of you, especially the comment about my writing style.

Thank you so much for the nice review!

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this was too funny! lolz!
but cute too. very cute 5 starzz!

Author's Response: Two good things! I'm very glad you liked it.

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Aha. Very cute. I love the way that Neville is so bluntly honest about his clumsiness and other problems. Luna could've been a little spacier, but I thought that she was sweet. It was just a very nice story. There were lots of things to make me smile, and I hope to see more from you. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I had a bit of a hard time writing Luna, and I agree that she could have been a bit spacier, but I'm glad you thought she was sweet. Happy you liked Neville!

I'll definitely write more, and I also have other stories up, as well. One of them goes along with this story; it's called 'Falling Ill'. Thank you so much for the kind review!

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Ahh too cute =D

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy you liked it!

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aw well cute i love neville and luna ship!

Author's Response: I love them, too. Glad you liked it!

Thanks for reviewing!

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Who would have thought? I like Neville and Luna as a pair.

I don't know why.

Author's Response: I know, right? ; ) Me too. Probably because they're both 'outsiders' in a way, although Neville not as much as Luna. Too bad they won't get together in the books.

Thank you for reviewing!

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Another very adorable story...I think I may attempt this kind of ship lol...on to the next story!

Author's Response: Wow! You're quick! I just finished recommending that you read 'Falling Hard' in my last response! I'm glad you're still enjoying!

I'd definitely read a Neville/Luna of yours since I'm such a sucker for them and since you've left me fantastic reviews!

Thank you so much for reviewing!

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I really like the fact that you're not trying to cram a novel into a one shot. You get to the point and let us know what the plot of the story is and then you just get on with it. I really liked the randomness of the first few sentences, how they are just in your face. It makes for good reading. You are really doing very well with your stories and it makes me proud to say I knew you before you would publish anything LOL!

Author's Response: One-shots are one or possibly two moments. That's why I like them, and I try to stick to that when I write them.

I think that whatever goes on in Neville's head isn't extremely lengthy or eloquent, so it is a bit random and consists of tangents that don't stray too far. I'm glad you liked that!

It means a lot that you think I'm doing well, as you're an incredible author yourself! Happy to make you proud! ; )

Thank you so, so much for reviewing!

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Absolutely adoreable--as I've always pictured Neville to be. I love your story. Well done :)

Author's Response: It's so great to hear that I got Neville right! He's such a fun character! ♥

Thanks for the compliments and for reviewing!

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that was pretty good. not my favorite but it amused me and was nice and short and you got neville's character down to a charm.

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought Neville was in character! And entertaining was what I was going for, so thank you!

I've just submitted a one-shot that's similar to this, not really a sequel, but it goes along with it. I hope you liked this one enough to check the next one out! Thank you for reviewing!

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That was amazing - my eyes are streaming with tears I've laughed so much... well written Luna and Neville stuff BEAUTIFUL! well done... Please write more asap

Author's Response: Why thank you so much! I’m glad they’re tears of laughter! This was supposed to be funny so I’m happy you thought so!

I’m so excited you thought they were well-written! That means so much to me! It really does.

I’m writing another Neville/Luna one-shot that should be up by this weekend. It’s written in the same style, so I hope you’ll come back and check it out!

Thanks so much for the wonderful review!

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Aww that's so adorable

Author's Response: I'm very happy you thought so! They would be such a sweet couple...

Thank you so much for your review!

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aaaw!

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oh that was cute!, you gotta love neville!

Author's Response: He's endearing, isn't he? I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing! It means a lot!

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