lucius that asshole. how could he kill his wife?! ill kill him. lol jk. good story BTW i love the song and the story fit great. keep up the good writting.

~Angel Riddle

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Nice job! I don't care for the whole Draco transformation thing

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I love it! That's all I can say. You couldn't possibly make it better. It's great.

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Lauren.. Its a really good piece of writing you have a gift for taking a simple idea and complelty blowing peoples minds away... its really good!! I enjoyed it heaps!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Sam :P

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Very good, now we only need a sequal to find out if Draco will ever find his real father.

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Okay I know I was supposed to review the other story of yours but, This one intrigued me... I love it!
Not only cause I love the song but also the concept
good show!

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:'(
It was so sad!!
But you used great emotion, and I give it a 10/10

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that is a sad story but good:)

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Very Nice! The song fit VERY well with everything that was going on!
Please review my stories too!
But i do have one thing to critizize on, I truly don't think Lucius is that harsh. I don't think he would get intoxicated like a bum on the street or somthing but that's my opion. just helping ^^;;;
Please review my stories!
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Author's Response: lol yeh i did think of that but if he's not cruel like that it doesn't really fit.. and well I kinda decided that the reason he kept getting drunk was coz of mounting pressure from Voldemort about the mysterious thing... Its his way of coping... and he's an angry man :P
anyway, thanks heaps for reviewing its appreciated.
Lauren

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