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Review #1, by Noonespecial Defense Against the Dark Arts

6th November 2007:
i want to know more! Please review!
Soon.

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Review #2, by Shading in Grey Defense Against the Dark Arts

9th May 2005:
You're doing good. The quality of writing's good, although you could improve the first para of chap 1 by using he/she more instead of their names. Also, please make sure you provide a reason for Harry's big personality change? However, this is well-written and an interesting plot. I'm looking forward to seeing more. ~Tania

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