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Review #1, by Fawks5 EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

6th November 2011:
OMG! I don't want to sound like a girly-girl (which I am not; I am a girl, true, but I'm not a girly-girl!) but it was so good! I love all your stories and I think you are an amazing author. I hope there's more to come!

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Review #2, by Lavander EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

28th August 2011:
wow. I've read all of your 3 stories, " Never say never", " After one night" and " The bad influence." All of your stories are amazing, and it has a different type of structure.

P.S: My first language is also Mexican. LOL aren't we common?

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Review #3, by MadameProngs Chapter 5: Animagus transformation

8th December 2007:
This story is really different from the other Marauder Era stories. Most stories have James as the leader from day one, but not this one. I really like this story, and it must be challenging to write a story so different from the other stories. I just have one little complaint: I don't think Sirius would have been able to be the Quidditch Captain when James tried out because he would have only had one year of experience playing on the Gryffindor team before he became Captain. Plus, don't you have to at least be a fourth or fifth year to be considered for the position?

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Review #4, by Isolde Eris EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

18th March 2007:
I loved your story. This ending was fabulous it explains why Peter was chosen as the secret keeper, the bonds that Lily and James developed, and I love how you had Daniel in the story! I was so sad when he died! Amazing job!

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Review #5, by witch767667 Chapter 12: Daniel's choice

11th December 2006:
*says sarcastically*Oh yes... Lily is just going to fall into Daniel's hands if James Potter is taken away. Lily is going to love him once she finds out he was helping out the Lord Voldemort.*stops the sarcastic tone* This is just too obvious, when Lily finds out Daniel's a Death Eater she's going to get mad at him!

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Review #6, by hazelstag1993 Chapter 8: A dangerous werewolf

19th November 2006:
OMG i was looking forward to that kiss. u are a really good writer by the way LOL!

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Review #7, by hazelstag1993 Chapter 5: Animagus transformation

19th November 2006:
I feel sorry for Daniel he seems like a nice guy - i know its fiction but i still feel sorry for him.

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Review #8, by thingy Chapter 1: On the Platform

20th August 2006:
VERY interesting idea. I like the fact that in your story James didn't start out as a marauder. Keep it up!

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Review #9, by Bellabambina Chapter 1: On the Platform

7th August 2006:
omg im hyperventalating(sp?)!! james was friends with snape?!!!

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Review #10, by HarryPottersgurl EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

30th May 2006:
its good, i have read better but this is definately at the top of my list

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Review #11, by HarryPottersgurl Chapter 2: Standing up for Lily

30th May 2006:
its good, but remember james is suppose to be a seeker.


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Review #12, by Sweden EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

28th May 2006:
This is fantastic! continue on these storys their wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Skriv mer!

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Review #13, by Junnicana EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

10th April 2006:
Great story with plot twist-Sev & James origially being friends.

Open endings..leaves things open for imagination..oh.my ;)

Love the plot twist..or did i already say that??

Anyways..Snapeys actions actually do make sense now. Great story. Right more!

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Review #14, by l/j_forever Chapter 17: A visit home

19th February 2006:
i think it's great so far, but i really didn't like the transition between the two chapters. i really really felt bad for daniel, and in the last chapter, she's mourning him, as she rightly should, and in this chapter, she seemed to forget all about him, like they were never even friends. i wanted to know how James finally coaxed her out and comforted her, and i just think it kinda ruined it, that it was like he wasn't even a part of her life, and all she cares about is James.

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Review #15, by Secondincharge Chapter 13: the attack

30th December 2005:
Wonderful story, very good so far! Keep up the good work!

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Review #16, by dewdrops_lily EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

29th October 2005:
Hello....This was very emotinol full of suspense hate love and so much more than your usall fan fiction...You have talent and i just think that you could do so well go so far all you have to do is try! And i'm usally bouncy and hypo but i decieded that for my (i call them my long last reviews) Last review i would settle to a more sensible attitude... This story had so many wonderfull warm moments that made me smile and some that made me fumming with anger and with every wonderfull story comes those moments that this one had were i cryed bitter and sad tears ....i think you could do so well with writing so i say..GO FOR IT TAKE THE CHANCE YOU HAVE!

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Review #17, by lilyemraldevans EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

22nd October 2005:
Wonderfull i'm sad it ended and that last line got me sad and annoyed with peter sad becuase they say With being the secret keeper, I believe we are safe. The are not safe...that maDE ME CRY

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Review #18, by lilyemraldevans Chapter 12: Daniel's choice

22nd October 2005:
ARHHHH I HAT WARD BUT U R SUCH A GOOD WRITER

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Review #19, by lilyemraldevans Chapter 11: Making a move

22nd October 2005:
i HATE WARD AND PETIGREW I LOVE THIS STORY

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Review #20, by lilyemraldevans Chapter 4: And so the bad influence begins...

22nd October 2005:
Ahhhh she's phycik

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Review #21, by lilyemraldevans Chapter 1: On the Platform

22nd October 2005:
loved it i now see how u r gona get lily to hate james

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Review #22, by LoveSpells EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

3rd April 2005:
Omg your fic is aesome I just love to be reminded how things happened in the real storie, Too bad James and Lily dies (I love them so much) because now i an't ask you to make a sequel lots and lots of luv ~*Ellie*~

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Review #23, by LoveSpells Chapter 1: On the Platform

3rd April 2005:
Great story im difinatly fifnishing this one lol

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Review #24, by sports_girl4 EPILOGUE: The times ahead of us

1st January 2005:
good job! keep up the good work! =D

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Review #25, by Emerald_Angel Chapter 4: And so the bad influence begins...

22nd October 2004:
Hmmmmmm what does it mean indeed... Lily you nitwit you're seeing the future

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