i totally loved this story! nice job!Author's Response: Thank you! =) Report Review
AWWW! Ron's so sweet, this is EXACTLY what he would be thinking!! :) Poor Ron just can't control himself!! And poor Hermione being on the recieving end of it!!! :( I really love this story, I think it is quite unique, I haven't seen many others like it!! I love this story, you are a truly talented author!! :) 10/10!!! :PAuthor's Response: That was one of my earliest HPFF stories, actually. To tell you the truth I'd almost completely forgotten about it :)
Thank you sooo much for the wonderful reviews! You're the BEST!
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Awesome!Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Okay I liked it. I decided to read this after you left me that very mean sprited review. Congrats on being able to write a story in first person.
But next time try to be more constructive in your reviews. You can't just say something is horrible, you have to say why.Author's Response: I'm really sorry I said that, toonmili. Really sorry. I hope you can forgive me (I really mean that, seriously!!!). But thanks for the comment. Report Review
Excellent. Very nicely written. As soon as I read GOF again I'll give you the Yule Ball dialogue, alright?Author's Response: Sure =D Report Review
definitally not bad @ all. i think u pertrayd ron realy well cuz he got jellus wen krum showed up w/hermione. r u gonna rite more or just leaf it like it is. Author's Response: I think I'm going to continue this even though it was just a filler story, something to keep my HPFF account running so I didn't abandon it. Thanks for the review =D Report Review
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