this is bull shiz and i hate it. Report Review
i know it has been a long time but could u please update this? I want to know what's going to happen now?^_^
Harry and Ginny Report Review
I love this!!! I have not wrote any fics. but you can read my favorite fic.s. Please write more! Report Review
that was great I love yours mine and ours and harry potter though you might want to make it a little bit less of a copy of yours mine and ours just add a little bit of new stuff otherwise it is superb Report Review
I stopped mid-chapter. I've never done that before, but I was forced to now. Are you a third grader? Because that's the grammar/sentence developement you have. I'm really, really sorry to be so harsh, but it's true. Please. I beg of you. GET A BETA.
I really am sorry. You probably think I'm a heartless person that rhymes with witch, but I'm not. It's just really that bad. Report Review
A. You're writing is TERRIBLE. No offense, that is.
B. You only have to capitalize PROPER NOUNS. Take the last sentence of your author's note, for example: The only thing that needed to be capitalized there is There, Ron and Hermione. That's it. Nothing else.
C. A quote and then "he said" is one sentence. So after the quote, INSIDE THE QUOTATION MARKS, you put a comma.
D. He said, she said. Think of it this way: said is dead. Try to use other, more discriptive words.
E. Have you already found your beta? If not, I would like to beta this story for you. Report Review
I like it. it's a bit confusing to follow sometimes but I should have a paper that said wich child belone to who. I will do that next time LOL please update soon.Author's Response: You can see the list in third chapter i think. Lol, thanks for the reveiw. Report Review
I'm not an OFFICIAL beta yet, but I'm really good in spelling, grammar, and briticisms. Good Chapter! Write more! I'll surely read it!Author's Response: Well, if your ever intrested in beta-ing this story, please let me know, you could reach me at firstname.lastname@example.org. Thanbk you for your reveiws. Report Review
oh. Things aren't turning out as well as Ginny and Harry had hoped.Author's Response: No, but thats why it's so fun. Thank you for your reveiw Report Review
wow, that's a brilliant first chapter.Author's Response: Thank you, I think my writing gets better with every chapter, lol. Report Review
I DEMAND MORE!MORE MORE MORE!Author's Response: LOl, I'll try. Thank you for your reveiw. Report Review
Dudududu! I present, the greatest story evah!!!
PS I think you spelled enthusiasm right!Author's Response: Thank you. I really like you reveiws, lol. Report Review
AWWW.What happens next? Write more!Author's Response: I just got my internet all up and loading so, and just sent out my new chapter. Hope you enjoy. Report Review
Great!!! Awesome!!! Every single praise word!!!Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you, lol. I just got the next chapter sended. Report Review
Great!!! I luv it! LUV IT!Author's Response: Thank You, I moved so it took a while to get everything done and ready. Report Review
really really good!Author's Response: Thank you, I'll update soon, I'm moving so It's hard to get to a computer at the time, lol. Report Review
keep updatingAuthor's Response: Thanks, your reveiw was helpful. Report Review
great story keep updating
Author's Response: Thank you, again. Report Review
great beginning love it keep updatingAuthor's Response: Thank You Report Review
This story is really wierd, no offence, but is funny. Did u get this idea from that one movie that Nick had? I forgot the name, but... This is just funny, good story : ))Author's Response: I don't know a Nick, well if you don't count my older brother, lol. I was watching the movie, and I just started typing. But thanks for the reveiw.
-Savannah Report Review
i'd love to see moreAuthor's Response: Thanks, i'd love to give some more, lol. Report Review
This is so cute! Please update!Author's Response: Thanks you. i luv ur pen name, it sooo cool. Report Review
It's good. THey have a lot of children though.Author's Response: Lol, I know. Report Review
i enjoyed this chapter! the story is getting much better!! i would like to read more! keep writing, and update soon!! :)Author's Response: Thak you. next chapter in about a week or two. Report Review
good chapter! easier to follow than the first, and the story is getting going a bit! but maybe a bit rushed though.Author's Response: i know but hpfully i shoud get the next chapter soon. Report Review
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