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Review #1, by edenvirg The Begining

21st August 2007:
Hello. :)

I came across this. Your story line really looks promising, but I think you should put some effort into details. Don't be afraid to write and expound on the characters, especially on Hilary, who's an OC. :) And I'd also recommend that you don't rush into anything just yet just because you want to get to a certain part you've been wanting to write.

Hope that helps. :)

Author's Response: Yah. this was my first try but i'm going too write more, I feel I've improved since then.

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Review #2, by Regulus_Black The Begining

17th May 2007:
Great start but could of been longer

Author's Response: thanks for the comment and I'm planning on adding another chapter

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