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Review #1, by massieblockrox -x-The-long-break-up-x-

20th October 2010:
I liked it! You havn't updated this in awhile, so I guess a new chapter won't appear . . . . it was a great start, I wish you'd continue!

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Review #2, by shade_of_lovely -x-The-long-break-up-x-

1st May 2008:
ok, first off--slow down!! You have a great plotline, but rushed through it just to get this chapter out.
second--work on character development. How did Hermione make the change from bookworm to Miss Diva? Who the Heck is Jaque? Give some insight on the characters (what they look like, how they are acting, etc.)
third--Minor spelling/grammar errors and double-space story
Update Soon!

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