Oh my gosh! this is awesome... i loved it! it was sooo funny!10 out of 10!Author's Response: Thank you :] xo Report Review
Still AWESOME! 10/10 LalalalalalaAuthor's Response: MERCI! ♥♥♥ Report Review
Lol! Once again awesome 10/10Author's Response: Thanks! ♥ Report Review
Lol! Stilll laughing. Must make this short and sweet so i can read more, AWESOME! 10/10Author's Response: :) ;) ♥ ♥ ♥ :) ;) ♥ ♥ ♥ Report Review
Ha ha ha! Lol! That was funny! Don't we all annoy ourselves at times? But i dont think ive ever had an actual conversation with myself. *Thinks really really hard* Ow ok I have got to stop thinking so hard. Lol! Now i read more. Bye. 10/10Author's Response: Bonjour! Mwah, mwah (*air kisses*). Sorry. Just had my first French lesson.
Thanks v. v. v. v. much for the review! You are my first reviewer in AGES! You know that? Merci! Report Review
really good. good job!!Author's Response: Thank you! Good job reviewing! Report Review
I think this is a good start to the story, but the formatting makes it kind of hard to follow.Author's Response: Um...
Thanks, I guess. I hope you like the other chapters more. :) Report Review
I LOVE IT! woot! 10/10! excitedAuthor's Response: Yay! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BTW, please read the sequal, Lily in Love Part 2: A Sixth Year of Love!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PWETTY, PWETTY, PWETTY PWEASE!!!? Report Review
OMG! i so luf dis story itz so cute i hope deres a sequal
:)Author's Response: Yup, I've already started writing the sequal!!! Yay! :o) Report Review
Yay! I loved this story! It was amazing! I can't wait to read the sequel!
10/10Author's Response: Thank-you very much! You're one of my most faithful reviewers. Here, have some virtual chocolate! Report Review
WHATT? I can't believe you just did that. But your the author. Also, I think you kind of rushed the end though. Good anyway though.Author's Response: I know, but there's a sequel. Anyway, please read that one! Report Review
Wow, I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the awesome writing!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've already finished writing this on Word, but I've got two stories validating at the moment, so it might be a while.
Anywho, thanks HEAPS for reviewing!! Report Review
Hey! Hahaha! I love that spell! It's hilarious! This was a great chapter!
Can't wait for more!
-Tanya:)Author's Response: Thanks! I was quite proud of that spell... my sis does Latin at school, so she worked out the words. Anyway, THANKS SO MUCH for reviewing. I can't believe this is the second-to-last chapter! :( Report Review
I love this chapter!Author's Response: Thanks!!!!
OMG, I can't believe this is the second-to-last chapter!!!! Oh well, there's going to be a sequal.... anywho, THANKS for reviewing!!!!!!!! Report Review
This is great! I was laughing out loud (especially when my brother started to look at me strange)! I love James line: Oi, Padfoot, feeling a bit blue? I also love lemon gelato! (One of the men in the little white coats gave it to me, along with a sleeping pill.*nods off*)Author's Response: Hee hee, thanks!!!! Not that I have any brothers, but when I was reading a fanfic with my sisters, we were all laughing soooo hard, and clutching our stomachs, etc. that mum and dad got a bit weirded out and decided to go grocery shopping. My sisters are HP freaks too. Seriously, mum and dad are praying for the day we'll get through a meal without the mention of Harry's kids, or Harry and Ginny, or Ron and Hermione, or THEIR kids, or the latest HP fanfic... it's quite funny, really. Anyway, here's some virtual chocolate for reviewing: *gives maurader_fan a HUGE block of virtual chocolate* Yum! Chocolate! Well, anyway, byebye! Report Review
Oh my god I am literally shaking with laughter! That is the most hilarious chapter ever! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Can't wait for more!
-Tanya:)Author's Response: Thanx!!! Would you like some chocolate? Unfortunately it's virtual, but oh well: *gives virtual chocolate* The good thing about virtual chocolate is that no one can be allergic. Yippee!
I just sent a chapter in to be validated for my other story (A Fifth Year of Friends), so it should be about a week til this one's updated.
Bye bye. Ciao! Report Review
Although I didn't really read it!Author's Response: Hey, LEMONADE!! And you made a bebo... congrats!!! C ya at skool.~~~~~~~~~~~~ Report Review
I'm a rabbit!
And a frog!
My mother was a rabbit and my father was a frog.
So what am I?
You decide.Author's Response: A froggit - much cooler!
I'm a chicken.
And a cow.
My mother was a cow and my father was a chicken.
So what am I?
You decide. Report Review
this is an awesome story!Author's Response: THANX!!! Here's some virtual chocolate, because, not only did you review (which just makes you a generally COOL person), you are a VERY, VERY, VERY, VERY COOL person. So anywho, here's the choc: *gives virtual chocolate* Report Review
sleepovers are good fun. wrecking havoc . going psycho. laughing at the stupidest things. licking a plug outlet. =] lmao. my dares are always somewhat harmful. anyway it was a cute chapter. those girls are a little dramatic but i guess they had the right to be. .. until next time. Author's Response: Yeah, they were supposed to be a little bit dramatic. yay! Sleepovers RULE! Yeah... unfortunately I have to wait 'til the final HP book to come out (only two days to go!!!!!!!) before it'll let me update, but who cares? I'm about to read the final book, where J.K Rowling will:
Get Harry and Ginny together
Get Ron and Hermione together
Get Lavender and Colin together (yeah, this is a bit random, but it seems sorta likely...)
Get Harry to destroy four horcruxes (I think)
Get Harry to kill Voldemort and multiple other Death Eaters.
So yeah. She has a lot to do. Ciao! Report Review
=] will james ever learn?? lol. i thought roxy would bitch slap lily so hard. that wouldve been funny in a wierd way. .. cute chapter. off to review more! adios. Author's Response: Yeah, i was sort of planning to make Roxy bitch slap Lily, but i sorta decided not to coz that would mean them not being friends, and I need them to be friends for later on. Yay! You reviewed!!! Report Review
LOL i cannot WAIT for the update! thats a cliffie! WAAH! the most happening chapter i have read in ages! =D “I reckon we should keep Black this way,It’ll stop his head from getting any bigger.” AMAZING LINE! SO LILY EVANS!Author's Response: Hee hee. I loved that line too, very proud of it. I just sent in a new chapter to be updated so... :)!!! Here's some virtual chocolate: *gives virtual chocolate*
Yay! GO Lily! Report Review
OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
Well, except that Hogsmede was cancelled. But other than that I love it!
And you dedicated the chapter to me!(and many others)
Can't wait to read more!
-Tanya:)Author's Response: Yes, well, thanks!!! Glad you found it hilarious. I'll try and update, but I'm also writing another story/fanfic/whatever-you-want-to-call-it (see 'A Fifth Year of Friends'), so I take it in turns to update. Ciao!!! Report Review
i NED you too,
email me when you have updated, i have a knack of forgetting to check for updates, so please? my email is email@example.com
UPDATE SOON!!!Author's Response: Updates, I need to remember to. I'll also try to remember to email you... hm, mental note: EMAIL BARELY_HUMAN AT GORGEUSGORGEUS@HOTMAIL.CO.UK. xox for reviewing. Report Review
yay! Mandy and Remus forever!
i don't like Peter though so i hope Millie dumps him =]]
good chapter...Author's Response: To see whether Millie dumps Peter then read my next story, Lily in Love Part 2: A Sixth Year of Love, coming soon on harrypotterfanfiction.com!!! MANDY AND REMUS FOREVER!!! ... actually, doesn't he fall for Tonks? Report Review
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