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Review #1, by Lily Opal Evans A day in the life of Jack Granger

25th June 2007:
ok, first off, i found it a little confusing, like, how old was Jack? but i did like the way you had a sort of `day in the life of` theme. It was very descriptive and i especially liked the way you made Harry as the `protective father` after ginnys' death.

Author's Response: 25 years earlier Hermione returned with a one year old son so he is twenty-six. I guess I could have made it clearer. Thank you for the review. Somethings that might have been confusing will probably be cleared up in the next story I write about Jack. It won't be up for a while.

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