Good use of the song lyrics,
i think it's good how you kept the description minimal and the dialogue simple; focusing on the lyrics as the main structure of the text. It's a nice character reflection. Well done!

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it was ok, but there was a LOT of scrolling down because of the spacing in the poem and there wasnt enough story in it. i liked it but i would be better if it was longer.. keep writing. ~hlj~

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Okay, two things: Great story, great lyrics to go with the fic! Ron was so cool in this, he knew what to say and when to say it! 2) The only improvements I think you could make is not to say "the end" or "fin" at the end of a fic, it just annoys me! lol

Another great story!

~Cedrics_gurl~

Author's Response: lol I always put "The End" or "Fin" at the end of a fic. I don't know why I do it it's an annoying habit. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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that was sweet! nice work!

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Hi!! I love it. I just review your new story not this one. I like it. Can you pit more writing to this and more sing story. I am a fan of Kelly Clarkson. I have her 1 and 2 ablums. I think I have this one too. Is this song from her new c d or oldest ones? They have a song from Carrie Underwood called " Before He Cheats. 100-100!

Author's Response: lol this is only a one shot unfortunatately because I tried to develop it into a full length story but I wasn't happy with anything so I left it. I'm a fan of Kelly Clarkson too, I idolise her. This song is from both Thankful and Breakaway. Thankful has the original version on it and Breakaway has a live version. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Not bad at all


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