It went to fast but very good choice of words. I liked the descriptions of everything going on around them. I also liked the fact that you wrote a story about George because not many do.

P.S. Be sure to read my story. plz!

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Good song and story :)
-quidditch77

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sweet. loved it! : )

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oh I loved it. it really made me look at the song in a different way to, so kudos to you! ;)

much love,

Bailey

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Great song, great story. =D

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Thanks. :)

-Carrie

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That was beautifull I really like the way you wrote it and you pick a really nice song

Author's Response:
Aww, thanks. :)

-Carrie

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Aw. super cute =]

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*blush* Thank you. :)

-Carrie

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cute cute cute!
kinda cliche but i

Author's Response:
Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed. :) It was just a fluffy thing that I had going in my mind. Cliche was kind of key in this. ^_^

-Carrie

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This is a sweet piece. It's rare to find a fic with George without his other half. The song was beautiful as well and fits the story perfectly.

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Thank you. It is quite rare for one of those fics. I hardly ever find them. I'm glad I made te song fit well. Thanks for the review!

-Carrie

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Absolutely lovely!

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Thank you!

Carrie

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I love the twins' stories! This is so cute!

Author's Response:
Heehee! I love Gred and Forge. They're, like, the best! I'm glad you liked this!

Carrie

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Awww, how utterly SWEET! *^^* 10/10!

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Aww, thanks!

Carrie

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Oh! That was one of the sweetest things I've read on this site! I just love it! It was beautifully written and was brimming with emotion. I've never heard the song before, but I'm going to look it up right now!

I'm so sorry it's taken me forever to get to your lovely stories after you've given me great reviews! I'm so glad I finally did. Truly touching, Carrie, and I have to read some more! Be on the look-out for more reviews from me!

Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! Dashboard Confessional is amazing. If you like 'Stolen' you should check out 'So Long, So Long' and 'Dusk and Summer.'

It's all right! Don't sweat it! My reveiwing you stories doesn't mean that you have to review mine. That's an option, not that I mind it. Thanks so much for the sweet review!

Carrie

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awww!!! Howt romantic! I really, truly loved this one... *sigh*... And the song is so beautiful too...

Author's Response: Awww, thanks! I know the song is beautiful! I simply love it! I'm glad you liked the story!
Carrie

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Awww... what a beautiful story. What a beautiful song too. Carrie is OBSSESSED. Chris Cabbarra. Pfft.

Btw... Guess who?

Author's Response: Yessss! I'm obsessed and proud! Aww, glad you liked it, Penelope! Oh yeah! I called it! Chris is hot!
Carrie

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OMG! This was sad...honestly, I'm gald for that game in TDA, I can find great stories now. :)

Author's Response: You think it was sad? Aw, that wasn't the point, but if I evoked emotion, that's good! Yeah, me too! I usually find good stories on my own, but it's neat-o to find stories written by people on TDA.
Carrie

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Very, very cute. It was pretty well written, however, there were a few sentences that seemed a little choppy and dull. Other than that I enjoyed it a lot, and I could picture George's nervousness. The lyrics were lovely and I thought they went with the story perfectly. The only suggestion I have is that next time you should put the lyrics in either bold or italics because they blended in with the story text and I didn't realize that what I was reading were lyrics at first. Great job! =)

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought th at the lyrics were in italics...hmm, I better fix that! Thanks for the review.
Carrie

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SO cute!!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you!
Carrie

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ok. but i would really like it if you wrote stories, long ones then short stroies or song fics.


Author's Response: Aww, you like my stories that well? Then you're in luck! I've got a chaptered story in the queue!
Carrie

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awww that was sooo cute!
ahhh!
deff. rocked my socks. =D
10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! I spent a load of time on it! Thanks for the ten!
Carrie

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