{reviewid: 2539398, reviewer: 'fatmermaid'}
28th June 2011:
It's a good start. A short chapter and a LOT of detail. I just hope that your writing improves as I read further into the story.
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{reviewid: 2175249, reviewer: 'marauderqueen'}
27th July 2009:
What a sweet ending!
Maeesha and Remus! Didn't really expect that! But it was cute all the same!
Loving it
marauderqueen
100
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{reviewid: 2006855, reviewer: 'Kathy'}
11th December 2008:
Aw! THat's like the cutest but I like her fashions total me! Black all round with me you should see most of my clothes completely blackbut I have some other colours too. Any way that was cute nice ideas for pictures and dresses by the way they really went well with the chapter. looking forward to reading more of your sirius/oc ones if you have any.
Kat xoxo
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{reviewid: 1964320, reviewer: 'lu'}
14th October 2008:
ok well i really liked your story...loved your sirius. i hope that you write a sequal because i think you should. At the start you mentioned all this stuff bout Sirius playing a guitar...you could totally incorporate that into a love story...eg. he totally stuffs up with eva and has to get her back then he writes here a song...but like expand on that. i think it would be awesome but thats up to you.
Again...great story.
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{reviewid: 1869496, reviewer: 'dancer_cwsa'}
19th March 2008:
very good! but i hate abrupt endings. anyways, thx 4writing such a great story!
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{reviewid: 1822614, reviewer: 'slytherin_princess89'}
7th February 2008:
ok ok got it... evas a rocker chick...(sarcasm;)
all this sounds to me like you were writing about your own friends... its like.eh
it isnt like the marauders at all
but anyway, thanks, im enjoying the story^^
Author's Response: ouch.
it's not based on my friends...none of my stories are based on life experiences or anything like that
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{reviewid: 1822579, reviewer: 'slytherin_princess89'}
7th February 2008:
aw cmon
sirius cant b this boring
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{reviewid: 1727452, reviewer: 'maeesha'}
26th November 2007:
omfg! this is really weird cuz me and my frends were being stupid and we were searching our names on google and i typed my name(maeesha) and this came up it was hilarious newayz the description suited me i do hav naturally black hair and i hav blue contacts and i must admit i am pretty hott! jk newayz write more stories with my name in it nd ill read it... bye oh and i love green day the band
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{reviewid: 1691677, reviewer: 'slytherensangel26'}
30th October 2007:
cool
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{reviewid: 1691672, reviewer: 'slytherensangel26'}
30th October 2007:
you know, i am realy having fun with this is specialy when the boys were in the bathroom
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{reviewid: 1691664, reviewer: 'slytherensangel26'}
30th October 2007:
damn.
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{reviewid: 1691641, reviewer: 'slytherensangel26'}
30th October 2007:
omg. that was hilarious!
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{reviewid: 1691637, reviewer: 'slytherensangel26'}
30th October 2007:
cool!
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{reviewid: 1688585, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
28th October 2007:
loved it loved all of it. it was great. any chance of a sequel. along came lee sounds promising. anything to do with along came polly
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{reviewid: 1688576, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
28th October 2007:
sirius has got it bad. liked this chapter a lot
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{reviewid: 1686717, reviewer: 'lothlorien'}
27th October 2007:
gipsy girl? yeah that's really romantic.
please continue soon.
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{reviewid: 1686603, reviewer: 'MandySLupin'}
27th October 2007:
That was cute. I liked the story while it lasted, and it's still staying on my favorites, I assure you.
And... hehe... by 'fiuuf', did you mean 'Phew'?
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{reviewid: 1685354, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
26th October 2007:
aww! that was really cute~!~
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{reviewid: 1680418, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
22nd October 2007:
Sirius is jealous.
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{reviewid: 1674267, reviewer: 'DrPepperchik'}
18th October 2007:
i love this story!
update soon please!
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{reviewid: 1672848, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
17th October 2007:
and i thought they had feelings for eachother
Author's Response: they do =D
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{reviewid: 1671235, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
16th October 2007:
really really good! thanks for the quick update!
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{reviewid: 1668041, reviewer: 'marieluz'}
14th October 2007:
yay yay yay yay yay! it finally happened! and Mini Eva is still annoying, but hilarious!
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{reviewid: 1667699, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
14th October 2007:
sweet
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{reviewid: 1667698, reviewer: 'lothlorien'}
14th October 2007:
good chapter. i really like it. it must suck for eva to have a mini eva on her shoulder. but at least she got together with sirius. or did she?
please continue soon.
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