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Reading Reviews for A Wager On Love
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by kavitalahar the wedding!!!

8th July 2007:
TEEHEE I LOVED IT!!! do you remember me form quizilla?

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Review #2, by PirateForever the wedding!!!

6th June 2007:
Okays, sorry, but i'm gona leave a half nice half critical review.

I really didn't like the beginning. I dont think that a Griffindor would bet on sleeping with someone, because that is just plain harsh. A slytherin might have, but not Sirius. And i highly doubt that Lily and James would have been friends with someone like that.

HOWEVER i really really like the next two chapters. They were fantastic, natural and well written. The structure and charicterization was very good, but not the best i'm afraid. But i really like the chapters, and especially Gaby's character. And of course the chapter with Remus was cute!!!

I can't choose for her, Sirius or Remus??? Ai! I guess i'll have to wait for the next chapter!

Until next time then
~PirateForever~ XxX

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Review #3, by PirateForever Meeting again

30th May 2007:
Really cool story. very original =P Keep writing X

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Review #4, by ToriAlly Meeting again

15th May 2007:
Hi, I thought I'd be the first to rate your work cos it's good. Okay, the first chapter was a bit rushed but that was just getting the back story out of the way and I really enjoyed the second chapter. And I like the fact that Gabby's birthday's on the 27th January cos that's mine too. Anyway keep writing

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